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Parents locked in a loving embrace
Mum was wearing pink satin and lace
Making love on the floor
Their kids burst through the door
Just imagine the looks on their face!

Quickly covering bodies and tushes
They bribed the kids to spare their own blushes
Dad put some locks on the door
Just to be doubly sure -
So when entwined they enjoy their crushes

Contest: Entwined
Sponsor: Broken Wings
02-07~16

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/4/2016 5:27:00 PM

Oh Jan, you are such a hoot, this poem made me laugh especially with the attached picture. You rock! Congrats on a awesome write and win! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia I had fun with this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 11:55:00 AM

again, thank you for the nice reply. PD

Paul Callus

Date: 2/25/2016 3:10:00 AM

So pleased to come back with congratulations on this merited win, Jan! The humour deserved recognition. Hugs .....paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2016 3:38:00 AM

Thanks Paul I'm so glad it placed well:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 11:42:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:56:00 PM

Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/23/2016 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this clever limerick! Enjoyed it. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:56:00 PM

Many thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/23/2016 4:04:00 AM

The way you look at it is beautiful... Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:56:00 PM

Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2016 12:26:00 AM

humorous imagery on the theme, dear jan... sending my best congrats and huggs!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:57:00 PM

Many thanks Nette I had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/22/2016 10:04:00 PM

Congrats on great win with this superb verse Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:57:00 PM

Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

Date: 2/22/2016 6:50:00 PM

Jan...congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:57:00 PM

Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 2/22/2016 5:53:00 PM

This actually happened to me when I was seven. I found the room door locked, ran around the back of the house to get in the other room door.It was also locked. As I stood there, confused, I heard mother giggle. Well done as always Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/24/2016 1:58:00 PM

ha ha ha great story jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Steve Grammatico

Date: 2/14/2016 6:18:00 AM

Jan, perfect. I've read only a couple of the other entries; it wouldn't surprise me if you were one of the few to take this humorous tack--and make it work.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2016 6:55:00 AM

I don't think many will have gone with humour so I am hoping Broken Wings likes my take on the 'entwined' theme:-) hugs jan xx

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 2/11/2016 7:31:00 AM

LOL.. I totally loved this poem JAN.. most definately A 7....all the best in the contest// blessings

Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2016 9:59:00 AM

Thanks lewis it is a fun write i hope the sponsor likes my humourous take on 'entwined':-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2016 6:06:00 PM

haha, you thought outside the box on this challenge. GREAT humor as always, Jan. I am dying to come up with an idea for this one.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2016 6:25:00 PM

LOL I try and come up with something unique lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/8/2016 10:42:00 PM

Hilarious!!! That photo though looks familiar, seems all the girls I date have doors like that afterwards!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2016 9:12:00 AM

Ha Ha - got to say i think the pic suits the poem perfectly:-) hugs Jan xx

Elaine George

Date: 2/8/2016 4:45:00 PM

A good one,Jan. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2016 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Elaine i went for a fun take on the entwined theme:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2016 1:02:00 PM

laugh i must, jan.. you are sweetly wicked!... spill ink and don't close you funny pen..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2016 1:27:00 PM

I try to write with humour whenever my muse allows:-) hugs Jan xx

Anna Hopper

Date: 2/8/2016 12:52:00 PM

Lol! Awesome!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2016 1:28:00 PM

Thanks Anna:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/8/2016 10:13:00 AM

Oh goodness, yes parents truly need locks on their doors, and sound proof walls! This was fun to read, Jan. I even have a little blush on my face now after picturing this.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2016 1:29:00 PM

ha ha ha Cas love your comment - lie the new avatar:-) hugs Jan xx