Jan Allison Poet Limerick

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Entwined

Parents locked in a loving embrace
Mum was wearing pink satin and lace
Making love on the floor
Their kids burst through the door
Just imagine the looks on their face!

Quickly covering bodies and tushes
They bribed the kids to spare their own blushes
Dad put some locks on the door
Just to be doubly sure -
So when entwined they enjoy their crushes

Contest: Entwined
Sponsor: Broken Wings
02-07~16

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Cecilia Macfarlane March 4, 2016 at 5:27 PM Oh Jan, you are such a hoot, this poem made me laugh especially with the attached picture. You rock! Congrats on a awesome write and win! Hugs Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 5:32 PM Thanks Cecilia I had fun with this contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 11:55 AM again, thank you for the nice reply. PD

Paul Callus February 25, 2016 at 3:10 AM So pleased to come back with congratulations on this merited win, Jan! The humour deserved recognition. Hugs .....paul Jan Allison February 25, 2016 at 3:38 AM Thanks Paul I'm so glad it placed well:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 11:42 AM Jan, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~ Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:56 PM Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry February 23, 2016 at 8:41 AM Congratulations on your win with this clever limerick! Enjoyed it. :) Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:56 PM Many thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta February 23, 2016 at 4:04 AM The way you look at it is beautiful... Congratulations. Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:56 PM Many thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2016 at 12:26 AM humorous imagery on the theme, dear jan... sending my best congrats and huggs! Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:57 PM Many thanks Nette I had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 22, 2016 at 10:04 PM Congrats on great win with this superb verse Jan.. Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:57 PM Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars February 22, 2016 at 6:50 PM Jan...congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:57 PM Many thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray February 22, 2016 at 5:53 PM This actually happened to me when I was seven. I found the room door locked, ran around the back of the house to get in the other room door.It was also locked. As I stood there, confused, I heard mother giggle. Well done as always Jan. Jan Allison February 24, 2016 at 1:58 PM ha ha ha great story jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Steve Grammatico February 14, 2016 at 6:18 AM Jan, perfect. I've read only a couple of the other entries; it wouldn't surprise me if you were one of the few to take this humorous tack--and make it work. Jan Allison February 14, 2016 at 6:55 AM I don't think many will have gone with humour so I am hoping Broken Wings likes my take on the 'entwined' theme:-) hugs jan xx

Lewis Nyaga February 11, 2016 at 7:31 AM LOL.. I totally loved this poem JAN.. most definately A 7....all the best in the contest// blessings Jan Allison February 11, 2016 at 9:59 AM Thanks lewis it is a fun write i hope the sponsor likes my humourous take on 'entwined':-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2016 at 6:06 PM haha, you thought outside the box on this challenge. GREAT humor as always, Jan. I am dying to come up with an idea for this one. Jan Allison February 10, 2016 at 6:25 PM LOL I try and come up with something unique lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso February 8, 2016 at 10:42 PM Hilarious!!! That photo though looks familiar, seems all the girls I date have doors like that afterwards!! Jan Allison February 9, 2016 at 9:12 AM Ha Ha - got to say i think the pic suits the poem perfectly:-) hugs Jan xx

Elaine George February 8, 2016 at 4:45 PM A good one,Jan. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 5:15 PM Thanks Elaine i went for a fun take on the entwined theme:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud February 8, 2016 at 1:02 PM laugh i must, jan.. you are sweetly wicked!... spill ink and don't close you funny pen..huggs Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 1:27 PM I try to write with humour whenever my muse allows:-) hugs Jan xx

Anna Hopper February 8, 2016 at 12:52 PM Lol! Awesome! Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 1:28 PM Thanks Anna:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance February 8, 2016 at 10:13 AM Oh goodness, yes parents truly need locks on their doors, and sound proof walls! This was fun to read, Jan. I even have a little blush on my face now after picturing this. Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 1:29 PM ha ha ha Cas love your comment - lie the new avatar:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman February 8, 2016 at 6:56 AM Very humorous, Jan. Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 1:29 PM Thanks James I hope Broken Wings likes my take on the theme lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2016 at 3:49 AM - An experience no one forgets :) - Lock the door :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 1:27 PM I had fun with this poem Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez February 8, 2016 at 2:38 AM :-)))...i'm not blushing, but i have this silly smile while typing...may you and your humorous pen be always be entwined! hugs! Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 3:22 AM I hope my pen and I are never parted Kim - I had fun with this one lol Hope Broken Wings likes my take on the entwined theme lol:-) hugs jan xx

Wilfred Aniagyei February 8, 2016 at 12:55 AM Hahahaa....... That's an image I can't get out of my head...... So entwined! You did it again, Jan!! Well writted Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 2:10 AM Thanks Wilfred:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola February 7, 2016 at 11:48 PM Jan, thank you for making me lol! Very cute and clever :)...all the love, jill Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 2:10 AM Thanks Jill:-) hugs Jan xxx

Daniel Turner February 7, 2016 at 9:58 PM I love your sense of humor. When our children were very young I used to joke to my wife(now ex) to grease the doorknob so they couldn't turn it. Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 2:08 AM Thanks Daniel I had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Gitlan George February 7, 2016 at 8:02 PM now privacy is secure. :)) Jan Allison February 8, 2016 at 2:08 AM I found the picture and thought it suited my words perfectly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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