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Entranced

She was waiting in the plaza
a breath of fresh air
graceful as could be

I sat there in the distance
couldn’t take my eyes off her
imagining that she might
be waiting for a guy like me

She slowly sipped
her coffee cup
I watched her lips
their gentle touch

And in my head I juggled
dozens of scenarios
where I would sweep
her off her feet

As time went on
I realized I’d missed my chance
and let the angel pass me by



AP: Honorqable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Woods Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Missed chances... so sad. Written so well, relatable. Xo
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 10:15 AM
thank you very much, Crystol ~ have a lovely day
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