Enthusiasm

Enthusiasm pandemonium erupts when he comes home from deployment; soldier on furlough. Swiftly bum-rushed by wife and kids, which took him by surprise indeed! His dog, "Chooks," joined in, too Family... of five sure missed... Dad. Write A Poem About Enthusiasm Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger Date written: 06/21/2020

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/6/2020 8:17:00 PM

What a wonderful picture of an enthusiastic reunion - dog too! Congratulations and blessings my friend!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/6/2020 9:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam:-) Blessings to you as well!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/5/2020 8:47:00 AM

I am glad I read this delightful heartwarming muse of yours Edward. Nothing can match the enthusiasm of a father returning home. This is lovely. Congratulations on your splendid win my friend. God bless you. Keep writing and inspiring :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2020 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement, dear Aditi:-) Most obliged.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/21/2020 5:31:00 PM

Hello Edward, that is a very warm welcom from the family. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/22/2020 1:23:00 PM

Hello Edward, a hot humid day today, i am enjoying summer. I hope you have a nice day my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/21/2020 6:03:00 PM

Thanks for the comments and visit, Darlene:-) Enjoy your day as well, my friend!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/21/2020 12:16:00 PM

Wonderful entry and so great for father's day. Bless you, dear friend and fellow poet. .. Much love and blessings sent your way, Gina

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/21/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you for visiting, Gina:-) I appreciate the positive comments. Have a blessed day, my friend!