Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Dodoitsu

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09.08.2026

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Dodoitsu poetry form
- "LET'S DO IT ! " -
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

4th place in the contest

- Enthralled By Those Eyes -

                                   A moment of intense gaze
                                   so strong that time disappears
                                   The fire that ignites my soul
                                   stay with me tonight

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CayCay Godwin August 22, 2026 at 8:35 PM I've lived this so I fully feel the full measure of your words. It threw me back and here I sit .... it'll get better. Obviously, an excellent gem. CayCay

Howard Kerr August 15, 2026 at 6:18 AM Congratulations to you on your success, Anne-Lise. I’m delighted for you. Warmth and light. H

Sam Kauffman August 14, 2026 at 11:44 AM So mesmerizing, Anne-Lise! I am drawn into that hypnotic gaze and never want to leave! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings!

Howard Kerr August 12, 2026 at 12:51 PM Hello Anne-Lise, I’m most impressed by this remarkable work. Excellent word choice and flow. Good luck in contest.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Many thanks for your generous words on my Epiphany. Warmth and light, Howard

Joseph P. DiMino August 10, 2026 at 9:20 AM Too much hair. I look just like that, with the lights out. Love it! Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2026 at 9:56 AM :))) ... thanks :)))👍

Valsa George August 10, 2026 at 7:23 AM Mesmerizing gaze when they see themselves caught in a moment that turns into eternity. Powerful and enthralling description, dear Anne. Hugs🔥

Sara Kendrick August 10, 2026 at 7:07 AM This one reads like a good contender to me, Anne-Lise. Way to go. 👏👏 Sara K.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 10, 2026 at 6:48 AM Blazing!😍 Marvelously done! Good luck!😍

Sotto Poet August 10, 2026 at 5:20 AM Your vivid descriptions are stunning, and the way you describe the eyes makes me feel very attracted to them😄, Anne-Lise. Colors and feelings are used effectively to grab the reader's attention, and the writing's depth makes it more powerful.

Paula Goldsmith August 9, 2026 at 1:02 PM Your "Enthralled By Those Eyes" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading. Great Picture... They say, "the eyes are the window to the soul. Just maybe it it true. "Good Luck" I did "TILL I MET YOU." Hugs.... Enjoy your fun day writing away.............

Dorothy Gibbons August 9, 2026 at 12:32 PM Soooo so beautiful poem filled with love Anne-Lise your such a talented writer ✍️ it's an honour to call you friend hugzzzz 💞🫂🦄🌈

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 9, 2026 at 12:30 PM ...time disappears. Captivating images are woven into this romantic verse. Beautifully written! Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Heidi Sands August 9, 2026 at 10:01 AM Oh, beautiful poem. ! :)

Yann Rolland August 9, 2026 at 6:52 AM wonderful, like in movies Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2026 at 7:24 AM 😊