Enthralled by those Eyes

your eyes with dense black lashes
casting colors of sapphire
wet with ensnaring passion
hook me beyond flight.

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Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2026 at 2:05 PM

Beautiful expression of caring and how eyes can draw us in. Way to go. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K. 👏✍️

Kim Rodrigues

August 15, 2026 at 6:20 PM

Enjoyable! Love the imagery! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

August 12, 2026 at 12:35 AM

Ooh la la. I like this a lot 😊

Sotto Poet

August 10, 2026 at 5:15 AM

Dear Valsa, your vivid descriptions are stunning, and the way you describe the eyes makes me feel very attracted to them. Colors and feelings are used well to grab the reader's attention, and the depth of the writing makes it more powerful.

Timothy Ray

August 9, 2026 at 3:59 PM

Oh my, enthralled by four lines.... loved it....

Ink Empress

August 9, 2026 at 4:02 AM

Wow I absolutely love this take sweet Valsa! Especially the mention of sapphire there makes it a very stunning read! This form is cute and youv delivered one that I cant help but fave ! I tend to get hooked by eyes! Oh and I wanted to say also, that yes my twin sister writes poetry. Her name is auraofrhymes here, but she lost her password so she doesnt get online. But she writes very differently to me Pleasure reading you today Sending you light always 💎 👀 fave!