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Enter My Dream Smiling

Enter my dream smiling, never pausing to ponder why Whispering gently to me, exploring the phrases I write Listening to cadence of heart composing ardent reply Questions linger unanswered poking pain in teary eye Answers blunder aimlessly unresponsive to life's plight Enter my dream smiling, never pausing to ponder why I'll bring you comfort, discerning sigh, hearing your cry Witness the rhythm of passion scintillating in my sight Listening to cadence of heart composing ardent reply Not easy to share my feelings when love has yet to try Come prepared to lose yourself wandering in my night Enter my dream smiling, never pausing to ponder why Decipher romantic call, reveling in joy, lifting you high Hold my affection, embracing love, to shed your fright Listening to cadence of heart composing ardent reply Having discerned text of minds you have seen the light Surrender to sensual feelings , snuggling love just right Enter my dream smiling, never pausing to ponder why Listening to cadence of heart composing ardent reply May 29, 2018 Placed first in early January 2019 contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 4/10/2022 6:28:00 AM

This is a poetic form I find so hard to try even . But how skillfully, you have handled it here . Love the way you make the invitation.... ! Who with a heart can ever deny it? This poem I am adding to my FAV.... more to study its structure !

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/6/2019 10:15:00 PM

"Enter my dream smiling, never pausing to ponder why" To me, this says it all. Just being that close, even if in a dream- truly is enough. Or it can be. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/6/2019 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations for your win with this beautiful Villanelle! :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/31/2018 10:07:00 AM

Hi Vijay, this is such a wonderful Villanelle my friend. I do love this form, especially when the words are gentle. This is an excellent piece Vijay. This write touches the heart so deeply. Your talent is shining my friend. I love the content. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/9/2018 2:25:00 PM

sailing down your words they rocked excellent pen very beautifully painted piece i pray you have a blessed weekend

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/2/2018 8:21:00 AM

Wow! This is lovely, Vijay! Janice

Eve Roper

Date: 5/30/2018 11:07:00 PM

Fantastic monorhyme poem , Vijay, luck in the contest Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/31/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Eve. Not for contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2018 11:06:00 PM

well, you did rock this piece with such deep ardor, vijay...you must be in love!.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/31/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thank you nette.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/30/2018 10:59:00 AM

AWesome concept to enter your own dream,,love this...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Harry--always appreciate your visit and feedback.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/30/2018 10:03:00 AM

This is just so beautiful. There are so many romantic poems, but this one stands out.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 4:18:00 PM

I'm happy to read your comments ..many thanks SW.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/30/2018 8:42:00 AM

This is such an excellent poem, Vijay! Within this form, you have made a seamless flow of romantic expression and I love your title Well done !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Mike--always delighted to read your feedback.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 8:17:00 AM

You did this so well. I’m sure once she enters your dream you will both be smiling.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 4:17:00 PM

Happy to read your feedback..many thanks, Richard.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/30/2018 8:15:00 AM

A wonderful write...much peace permeates among words...All the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Arturo..always appreciate your kind words.

Silent One

Date: 5/30/2018 8:03:00 AM

A difficult form, but one you have done so well... Great rhyme and flow to your poem, with no lines out of place..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Silent One.

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2018 7:35:00 AM

The cadence of the heart drifting into a dream, Well penned Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/30/2018 5:34:00 AM

A tenderly romantic call that no heart can remain unmoved by its truthfulness of intentions! Superbly written by the palpitations of your loving heart my friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/30/2018 7:03:00 AM

Always happy to read your kind words..many thanks my friend, Demetrios.