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Enter Moon Gate

Once dreamy, butter-filled suncups, Shining ‘neath the moonlight. Past shadows shimmer on pond of Evening Primrose midnight. Spineless spirits, angel’s trumpets, Kept as outliers, aloft. Once shady blow - paired sleeping rocks Covered with lamb’s ears, soft. Dark and lightness ravish garden. Sweet scent rediscovers The sway of grass on little path; Reprints of fresh lovers. If only she’d whispered warning; “Enter moon gate,” was said. White creeping phlox - she’s as white as Sole touch of garden bed.

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Date: 7/6/2024 11:48:00 AM
Dear Kim, this is such a dreamy read with exquisite imagery,’ butter- filled sun cups, shadows shimmer on pond’ the sway of grass on little path, reprints of fresh lovers’. So beautifully creative and I love the title too. A magical read. Thank you for sharing this gem. Hugs and blessings xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christina! xoxo
Date: 7/5/2024 11:06:00 AM
Kim, this is amazing art! I absolutely loved reading it, a fav for me- so many lines, that lit my imagination....<3 xx hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2024 10:28:00 AM
I appreciate you so much, Paige! You make my day! xxoo
Date: 7/3/2024 2:44:00 PM
"Sweet scent rediscovers The sway of grass on little path; Reprints of fresh lovers." -- Love that!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe!
Date: 7/3/2024 1:31:00 PM
This poem enchants a flower lover's dream. The night setting gives it mystery. I feel the love of nature.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 7/3/2024 12:52:00 PM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one. Reads like an interesting plant and a very lovely garden. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 7/3/2024 2:13:00 AM
Your poem excels in its imagery and rhyme. Loved it throughout. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 7/2/2024 12:58:00 PM
Some lovely word pairing here Kim like, butter-filled suncups and soul touch... Loved the descriptions and the imagery..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/2/2024 12:07:00 PM
What a lovely write/story. I enjoyed reading this one....  Have a great day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2024 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Date: 7/2/2024 8:40:00 AM
great imagery and feeling, my friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2024 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve! :)

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