Entanglement

Pining for my love Wrestler, Sassy Moose Jaw Sal Body slam scripted Poem composed: November 24, 2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2021 4:00:00 AM

Interesting work. I am wondering who got the body slam the lover or the fighter? Congrats on your win with this one. Thanks for all the visits to my page. I kept thinking your last name seemed familiar then I remember the movie "Something Has Got To Give" and one of the stars surname in the movie was Sambourne. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/3/2021 6:38:00 AM

Hi Sara, Your body of work is most impressive. I have gone back to your pages to discover your poetry. My family name is British. There is a town in England named 'Sambourne.' My grandparents were servants to more prestigious servants in the Royal household. Canada meant egalitarianism to them. Thank you for corresponding. Brian

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2020 9:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/21/2020 6:55:00 AM

Hello Eve, Very nice of you to read my work. Thank you. Best wishes for health + happiness in 2021. Brian

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2020 3:33:00 PM

Hi Brian, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/19/2020 4:22:00 PM

Hello Alexis Kind of you to read my haiku + to leave a thoughtful note. Best wishes for the holidays. Sincerely Brian

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/19/2020 4:05:00 AM

Brian, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun and creative poem!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/19/2020 6:16:00 AM

Hi Tania Our appreciation for running a contest of humorous verses - so needed at this uncertain time. Best wishes, Brian

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2020 4:57:00 AM

nice one Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/25/2020 3:38:00 PM

You are so thoughtful in your wide ranging, positive comments to the writers on Poetrysoup. Much appreciated. Be well. Brian

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/24/2020 4:35:00 PM

A fun read! Good luck in the contest.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/24/2020 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Caren. Hope that you are well. Best wishes Brian