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Unaware A gasping Moment Pondered Silently The mind fast forwarding Rewinding A sign Perhaps A story to be told Old Of yesterday's mirrors Fears now rise Alone Together within A twisted mind Society And sobriety Un-willing Unable To defend A sip A dark path Once again A sound A church bell rings A choir Chants

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Date: 12/1/2024 7:02:00 PM
Dear Rick, your imagery is potent and creatively expressed. Society and sobriety can be a tough coupling. Relapse is only a sip away. Your last three lines are deeply moving. Congratulations for your success in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/14/2024 12:56:00 PM
The road to sobriety ain't easy, neither is holding on to it. Nice write
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