Enough Already

It was the sixth wedding for daughter Judy
who was quite plain and hardly a beauty.
Time came to give away the bride
whereupon her Father replied
"five times I've tried--I've done my duty."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Austin Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Oh, that DAWG, Judy. Love, daver
Schneiter Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 11:13 PM
I can hear the father saying to himself, "I've tried to give her away, Lord knows I've tried." Thanks for commenting, Daver. I value your feedback.
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:07 AM
haha, GREAT punch line.
Schneiter Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Obviously, paternal patience has its limits. hugs x x x
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 7:11 AM
lol he must have deep pockets ... maybe his daughter just likes wedding cake - would be cheaper to buy her one lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Made me smile even more knowing it is based on truth - no wonder the guests groaned if they have to stump up for gifts every time lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 12:48 PM
You always come through for me; thank you, Jan. The limerick is based on an actual event in my wife's family, except that "Judy" had been married four times, not five. The Father's comment drew strained laughter from those in attendance. hugs xxx
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