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Enough Already

It was the sixth wedding for daughter Judy who was quite plain and hardly a beauty. Time came to give away the bride whereupon her Father replied "five times I've tried--I've done my duty."

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Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2016 1:40:00 PM

Oh, that DAWG, Judy. Love, daver

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/7/2016 11:13:00 PM

I can hear the father saying to himself, "I've tried to give her away, Lord knows I've tried." Thanks for commenting, Daver. I value your feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2016 10:07:00 AM

haha, GREAT punch line.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/28/2016 12:31:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Obviously, paternal patience has its limits. hugs x x x

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 7:11:00 AM

lol he must have deep pockets ... maybe his daughter just likes wedding cake - would be cheaper to buy her one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2016 11:56:00 AM

Made me smile even more knowing it is based on truth - no wonder the guests groaned if they have to stump up for gifts every time lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/28/2016 12:48:00 PM

You always come through for me; thank you, Jan. The limerick is based on an actual event in my wife's family, except that "Judy" had been married four times, not five. The Father's comment drew strained laughter from those in attendance. hugs xxx