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Enlightenment

Wisdom comes to me.
Light bulb glows above my head.
I’m enlightened now!

Written by John Posey
04/03/13<>

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Poet Destroyer A

May 18, 2013 at 1:17 PM

yes, I love the poem... I love it when my light bulb clicks on... a good image... and haiku...Linda

John Posey

May 18, 2013 at 1:44 PM

You're more than kind in your gracious comments... They just add to my enlightenment.... Love ya.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2013 at 2:44 PM

hey, I can just see that light bulb going on above your head!! cute one.

John Posey

May 15, 2013 at 4:45 PM

I believe this moment of wisdom came just as I realized I was finally catching on to the proper way to create Haiku..... Jake

Judy Konos

May 11, 2013 at 3:06 PM

You're funny......

John Posey

May 11, 2013 at 7:20 PM

Thanks, It's nice to make others laugh or smile... Love ya dearly... Jake

Timothy Hicks

April 17, 2013 at 8:52 AM

I used to stick to 5-7-5, but I found the rule too limiting. The Japanese wrote their haiku using 5-7-5, however when you translate them into English they usually end up being much shorter. You can write them either way, but if you ever write a haiku that doesn't follow the rule, I'd still keep the poem!

John Posey

April 17, 2013 at 9:45 AM

You are correct in your evaluation of syllable count in Haiku composing. I notice many haikus posted do not hold to the 5-7-5 pattern. I choose to stay with the 5-7-5 pattern. For me, it presents a greater challenge... Thanks for your input. Great respect for your talent..... Jake

Timothy Hicks

April 15, 2013 at 3:31 AM

This is one of my favorite haiku from you. Though if I may make a suggestion I believe you could make even better by shortening it. For example... "a light bulb flickers above my head - enlightenment". Just my thoughts, however! Love your work :)

John Posey

April 15, 2013 at 3:39 AM

Thanks, I was trying to stick to what I believe to be the textbook syllable count of 5-7-5... I could be mistaken.... Jake

Holly Moore

April 13, 2013 at 8:02 PM

I love it! That's great!...I don't have those experiences too often!...xxoo Holly Moore

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 9, 2013 at 9:31 AM

Very good title for your wise haiku John - Like it, well done my friend - Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

April 7, 2013 at 5:56 PM

Thanks-you are quite bright and so right! I love this metaphor. The process of becoming enlightened is a long one, but it's funny that there is a sign to announce it so clearly once it has been achieved.