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Enlightenment - Haiku

the bud will open to reveal its heart of hearts patiently waiting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/3/2014 5:21:00 PM
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Big congratulations. One of my favorites so far in the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2014 2:59:00 PM
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simply stunning haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2014 12:23:00 PM
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- Really beautiful haiku Barbara -   Congratulations on your 5th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/2/2014 8:07:00 AM
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Beautifully done Barbara, simple, heart rending and thought provoking Haiku.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/2/2014 6:57:00 AM
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What a fabulous write Barbara! Congrats on ur super win!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/2/2014 4:53:00 AM
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Visiting back to congratulate you on this fine win, Barb
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/1/2014 10:02:00 PM
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Congratulations Barbara. A very nicely thought out Haiku. Through poetry we all slowly open and show our hearts.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/18/2014 3:18:00 PM
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this is very well done. This contest is eluding me and I sure wish I could come up with one as awesome as this one. It's gotta score high! (glad you enjoyed my mermaid poem. I am especially proud of that one.)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
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Reminds me of the lovely lotus blossom...entering enlightenment. Wow, what a wonderful entry Barbara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2014 10:09:00 AM
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Few words well printed..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/14/2014 9:23:00 AM
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Wow Barbara lovely haiku! Best wishes.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/14/2014 6:25:00 AM
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Very unique write on enlightenment, Barb
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Peter Dome
Date: 8/13/2014 8:04:00 PM
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Wonderful well done, best wishes. Pete.
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