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Enlightenment - Haiku

the bud will open to reveal its heart of hearts patiently waiting

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2014 5:21:00 PM

Big congratulations. One of my favorites so far in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2014 2:59:00 PM

simply stunning haiku many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2014 12:23:00 PM

- Really beautiful haiku Barbara - Congratulations on your 5th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 9/2/2014 8:07:00 AM

Beautifully done Barbara, simple, heart rending and thought provoking Haiku.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2014 6:57:00 AM

What a fabulous write Barbara! Congrats on ur super win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2014 4:53:00 AM

Visiting back to congratulate you on this fine win, Barb

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/1/2014 10:02:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara. A very nicely thought out Haiku. Through poetry we all slowly open and show our hearts.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2014 3:18:00 PM

this is very well done. This contest is eluding me and I sure wish I could come up with one as awesome as this one. It's gotta score high! (glad you enjoyed my mermaid poem. I am especially proud of that one.)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/16/2014 5:34:00 PM

Reminds me of the lovely lotus blossom...entering enlightenment. Wow, what a wonderful entry Barbara!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2014 10:09:00 AM

Few words well printed..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/14/2014 9:23:00 AM

Wow Barbara lovely haiku! Best wishes.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2014 6:25:00 AM

Very unique write on enlightenment, Barb

Peter Dome

Date: 8/13/2014 8:04:00 PM

Wonderful well done, best wishes. Pete.