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Enjoy Your Walk

Now who do you think, you really are, after two long hours, in the neighborhood bar. That smirky smile, tells me all I need to know, when you come out, your car will be towed. I have told you once, and I have told you twice, you have met your match, enjoy your walk tonight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/31/2009 12:36:00 AM
The poem is called (Some day God will fill a cup full of your tears) When you have some extra time on your hands please stop by and read it. I am sure you will appreciate it :) God bless you always,Dean
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Date: 12/31/2009 12:32:00 AM
Christy this poem truly shows that you are strong in many ways, more power to you girl, By the way I do want to thank you for sharing your song with me in your last critique , I am going to include a poem that I had written on my site with you in my next critique,please have a wonderful week and keep sharing your gift in poetry with all of us because you are truly a joy to read :) Dean
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Date: 7/5/2009 3:47:00 PM
Nicely written! - jeremia
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Date: 5/23/2009 6:14:00 AM
~lol~ Good for you! Smart lady! Glad someone knows not to let him drive. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/22/2009 7:29:00 PM
A stroll in the cool night air might have a sobering effect. Hey is your computer still down? I send you email and it keeps getting returned, hope all is well. God Bless, Ron
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Date: 5/22/2009 7:15:00 PM
Very creative... You decribe a situation with such little detail but such a big picture. -Reality
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Date: 5/22/2009 4:16:00 PM
Your friend may think you're being harsh, but you might really be saving their life. Way to go, Christy!
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Date: 5/22/2009 3:58:00 PM
You told him once you told him twice he should of listened to your advice. And next time he is in a bar make sure he does not bring his car. Leon
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