Get Your Premium Membership

Enigmatic

The secular love: you are contaminated between skin and prayer. Back from the odyssey finding a crop-circle in bridal chamber. Rival was an alien with a flat stomach thinking black. The thieving sperms had a glorious end, unentered in grass. Your body was churning out a religion. I will find out my own god. Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/6/2013 7:16:00 AM
KEEP WRITING TO ATTRACT THROUGHOUT POEM FROM FIRST TO LAST.YOU HAVE STARTED WITH FLOW BUT LOST AT LAST SIX LINES THOUGH IT IS GOOD.BUT IT WILL BE ATTRACTIVE WHEN POEM MAINTAINS FLOW FROM FIRST TO LAST WITH R THYME,FLOW AND RHYMES.OPEN VERSE POEM IS NOT FOND OF ASIANS.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs