Enigmatic

The secular love:
you are contaminated
between skin and prayer.

Back from the odyssey
finding a crop-circle
in bridal chamber.

Rival was an alien
with a flat stomach
thinking black.

The thieving sperms 
had a glorious end,
unentered in grass.

Your body was churning out
a religion.
I will find out my own god.



Satish Verma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 6, 2013 at 7:16 AM
KEEP WRITING TO ATTRACT THROUGHOUT POEM FROM FIRST TO LAST.YOU HAVE STARTED WITH FLOW BUT LOST AT LAST SIX LINES THOUGH IT IS GOOD.BUT IT WILL BE ATTRACTIVE WHEN POEM MAINTAINS FLOW FROM FIRST TO LAST WITH R THYME,FLOW AND RHYMES.OPEN VERSE POEM IS NOT FOND OF ASIANS.
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