Enigma

Jueju 10-8-24 
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Enigma

My baby has no grave
Slipping from my womb 
Upon a crimson wave
Too soon to feel your heartbeat

A son or a daughter
Your eyes blue or amber green
Your voice, a mystery
You - unsolvable puzzle – eternal enigma

Your laughter – never heard
Your smile unseen except by God
Unspoken your first words
Each birthday celebrated with angels

Yet, I believe you live, little saint,
Wrapped in Heaven’s embrace
Your first steps walked you into eternity
Where God revels in your perfect face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/14/2024 12:30:00 PM
A beautiful poem dear Sam.. Expressed so well..
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Date: 10/13/2024 10:08:00 AM
So sad and yet so beautiful, a new born who's first steps are in heaven.
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Date: 10/10/2024 7:43:00 PM
Your poignant words made the loss of that precious little one hit home, Sam. Beautifully expressed and very touching poem. Hugs! :)
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Date: 10/10/2024 4:08:00 PM
So sweet that it brought tears, Sam...
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Date: 10/10/2024 1:22:00 PM
tugging at the heartstring with language sublime and poignant ...beautifully constructed, Sam!
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Date: 10/10/2024 12:13:00 PM
The heartache of what could have been might seem unbearable at times. A star that shone too bright for this life on earth. A poignant write, Sam. Hugs, Su
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Date: 10/9/2024 8:03:00 AM
Dear Sam, Such a great tribute to the unborn child. You brought tears to my eyes and so well said. We have lost several children in our immediate family, and such heartbreak, but knowing in God's hands they go. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/10/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Daniel. Even though this poem came together rather quickly, it was a difficult one to write. My heart goes out to you and your family. I never could have gotten through this experience without the wonderful support of family, friends, prayers, my faith and my precious Jewish friend who insisted on lunches, shopping trips and coffee dates! I do look forward to that day when I will meet this little one. Sending you and your family prayers of consolation and autumn blessings!
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