Engulfed


This beautiful rose
She cries as the dark abyss
Engulfs her moment

Her flaming petals
Screaming as combustion takes
The blackness confirms

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 10, 2010 at 10:11 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest James. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2010 at 4:50 AM

Congrats James on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck in the next phase ..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

September 2, 2010 at 5:03 PM

nice one, congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Jayne Eggins

August 30, 2010 at 8:34 AM

Congrates on being featured this week James I loved this poem the first time I read it and its even more appealing the second time love Jayne x x

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

August 30, 2010 at 8:30 AM

Awesome Haiku, James! Congrats on your poem being featured this week! Caroline.

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2010 at 6:27 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup James F. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

August 29, 2010 at 8:26 PM

gorgeous haiku, congrats on having it featured this week

August 29, 2010 at 3:10 PM

Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 29, 2010 at 2:11 PM

Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice piece to share with us all.. with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

August 29, 2010 at 1:33 PM

Congrats on being featured.. I missede this one before..glad I had a chance to read it..its beatutiful.BG

Elaine George

June 6, 2010 at 8:18 AM

The power and symbolism of the rose! Such a magnificant haiku, John. Laini

Jayne Eggins

June 6, 2010 at 6:11 AM

Oh James this is the best haiku I have read in an age .. Psstt I am an acquired taste and its nice to be read, my books coming out later this year, so I got no complaints ;) love Jayne x x x x and big smile I have a few friends like you, thank god lol

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2010 at 8:50 PM

congratulations for your place in the top ten! LUv, andrea

Mac Mcgovern

June 4, 2010 at 5:55 PM

Conratulations on your win in my contest and thanks for submitting this marvelous work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 4, 2010 at 5:42 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in Mac's contest with this moe than amazing write depicting the lovely rose.. enjoy another great victory..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Marie Harrison

June 4, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Wow, this is a great poem. It's beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2010 at 9:32 AM

Great job, James. I particularly liked the image of the first stanza. She did seem to be surrounded by an abyss of darkness. I think we don't have to worry about those pandas. Poor things dying so fast, they sure will not have much opportunity to be attacking us. It was fun for me to learn about them in that contest. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

June 4, 2010 at 8:43 AM

Magnificent description of the photo, James. Those petals do see to be on fire. You gave special life to this rose! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 4, 2010 at 6:58 AM

This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration James. Love, Carol