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Energetic Sky



The Arizona Monsoons strike once again
 Violent light crashing up towards the sky
  Purple cloud chemistry flashes so colorful
   Bolts of spider webs splash through the night
    A tumultuous sky flares with charged energy
     That can strike down with certain death
      Watching safely indoors but still hold my breath 




         Written for contest I Form "Imagism" 09/19/2024
                        Hosted By: Constance LaFrance

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Joe Dimino

Date: 9/20/2024 5:28:00 PM

Hi Brian, Monsoons missed us this year, in central Phoenix where I am. But I have seen some wild-ones over the years...and you describe them well. Nicely done.

Brian Davey
Date: 9/22/2024 12:30:00 PM

Thank you I am in Havasu City and we got a couple but none like we've had in the past, they are quite amazing sometimes are they not.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/19/2024 8:09:00 PM

Pretty, powerful, and frightning imagery! Well done, Brian!

Brian Davey
Date: 9/19/2024 10:05:00 PM

Thank you I appreciate your insight