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Endless Waves

rolling endless waves of sea golden sand glistens freely, seagulls fly away

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2022 4:51:00 PM

You paint such a fine thought in so few words BJ it is as though I am there. To hear, see, feel the ocean and the beauty of it all. I picture Maine in this one. Loved this one from you BJ. Be blessed my friend...

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/28/2022 3:01:00 PM

:) Thank you Michael, I so want to visit the ocean again, memories are such a gift from God :) Thank you for visiting my poem, your encouraging words are such a blessing. I hope you are having a blessed day!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/26/2022 12:00:00 PM

Tis good to be free, fly where you want…

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/26/2022 12:25:00 PM

True! :) Thank you, Kim <3 I do wish gasoline were free, and resorts, it would be helpful ;) Oh my, remember your contest 'Buzzwords' my chosen buzzwords were 'Get it Free!' lol, I wouldn't believe those words anyway :) But maybe I should really try to figure out a fun getaway, our recent emergency re-pipe of our house after the 'amusing plumber' ordeal has had re-percussions on any travel dreams we have at present. Maybe soon though, with careful planning, we can fly away for a stay at the beach :) <3

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2022 6:35:00 AM

You bring back wonderful memories, BJ. Love this.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/26/2022 11:53:00 AM

I'm so glad Harry, memories are the true treasures we find at the ocean and beach :) I haven't been there in far too many years, but I treasure the memories. I hope your day is blessed and the week ahead is a wonderful one for you, thank you for your visit and comment :)

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 9/26/2022 12:26:00 AM

Rolling endless waves, golden sand. Beautiful Haiku BJ! The ocean is truly beautiful. God bless my friend<3

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/26/2022 11:49:00 AM

Ah, thank you Anna for your visit and sweet words! I hope you are blessed today with the beginning to an incredible week :) <3

Valsa George

Date: 9/25/2022 9:08:00 PM

Beautiful scene from the seashore... !Lovely haiku, BJ

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/26/2022 11:47:00 AM

I'm glad you like the poem Valsa, I love the ocean and would simply love to visit it again :) I hope your week ahead is bless and that you're having a lovely day my friend :) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2022 9:43:00 PM

very lovely!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! I hope you are doing well my friend. I miss our soupmail conversations :) Your visits are always such a blessing to me. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/24/2022 4:20:00 PM

A wonderful picturesque image you give us BJ. Nicely written my friend... Thanks for posting...

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:10:00 AM

Thank you Michael, I bask in the memories of the ocean, as a child I had such joy living in the bay area of Northern Ca, and it was such a blessing. Your visit and uplifting words are always a joy to me :) I hope your weekend is blessed!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/24/2022 1:22:00 PM

Captivating, my dear friend, BJ!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios my friend, your visit and words are a joyful blessing to me, I hope you are having a blessed weekend, thank you so much for your visit and sweet comment :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/24/2022 12:25:00 PM

I love the contrast here between a boundary and the unbounded. Lovely! :)

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:06:00 AM

I'm glad you liked the poem Evelyn :) I love the coast, it's launching off point from the shore into the big beautiful ocean and its myriad of life. The wonderful seeming joy of the seagulls has always captivated me :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2022 10:49:00 AM

The glory of life!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:02:00 AM

:) Thank you Kim, for your sweet comment and your visit, You have blessed my day! I hope you are well my friend, and that your weekend is going well :) <3

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2022 10:18:00 AM

Intelligent way of using gulls in this haiku. It means good weather.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/25/2022 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Victor, I hope the weather will be good, no more hurricanes :) Honestly, we have been blessed though we are not near the coast from the hurricanes that have been a sore trial to the coasts. When the percipitation reaches the deserts, we are blessed incredibly. Sadly, we have no seagulls. Though some don't like them much, I always loved them. I miss the coast and guess I always will.

Joseph May

Date: 9/24/2022 5:22:00 AM

Great imager in this lovely Haiku, Nicely done

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/24/2022 11:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph, your words are so encouraging to me. I hope you're having a blessed weekend. Thank you for stopping over for a visit :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/24/2022 4:12:00 AM

Such a beautiful description! A shore to sit and dream or simply be carried away, that eternal sea that calls us to endless voyages of depth-full imagination. Yep, a Fav! for sure. Blessings my friend.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/24/2022 11:55:00 PM

I'm so blessed that this is a fave for you Joe! I can only contemplate the sweet memories, knowing it continues in its glory. We have a captain's wheel, shells, model ships in our home in the desert :) Memories of the waves, shore and sea are cherished <3

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2022 3:41:00 AM

On some days I wish I could visit the seashore once again. Thanks for sharing a moment in time with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/24/2022 11:52:00 PM

I hear you Sara, me too. The ocean was a part of my childhood, and I haven't seen it for about seventeen years even for a visit, but even if we can't see it, its still there <3 I love it so much, and remember it all so well, memories are such a blessing <3