Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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Endless Horizon

Beautiful day, towards the endless horizon
a tangerine and yellow sunlight's heart
has burst with a vibrant bright capri
and azure skies, as shadowed zaffre rolling ships
meet the silent bice cerulean horizon.
Extending giving way to the clear mirror
bleu de france sea denim shadows and the scent of salt.
Into the captivating beautiful smudges
of coral, lavender, turquoise, oceans' depths
that cannot compare; to the deep-sea creatures
that prefer to remain that lures divers into their depths.

7/16/2018


Bice, from the French bis, originally meaning dark-coloured, is a green or blue pigment made from basic copper carbonate.

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Susan Gentry August 11, 2018 at 6:37 PM ,Back again to congratulate you again. Beautiful imagery.

Constance La France August 10, 2018 at 2:00 PM Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing write and I love the image too!

Susan Ashley August 9, 2018 at 9:50 PM Your poem's colorful imagery is endlessly enchanting, Eve. Congratulations on your excellent win with your spectacular piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Gondolf August 9, 2018 at 9:23 PM Eve, congrats on your win for this lovely verse. John

Gershon Wolf August 9, 2018 at 8:57 PM Color this poem DAZZLING, Eve! Wow! Congrats on your win in the contest! :) gw

Vijay Pandit July 21, 2018 at 7:23 AM Congrats Eve on your first place win.

Gary Smith July 21, 2018 at 3:05 AM Beautifully written Eve, congrats :)

Susan Gentry July 20, 2018 at 11:05 PM Congratulations on your #1 win. A beautiful poem with imagery that painted a picture in my mind. Enjoyed. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy July 19, 2018 at 1:32 AM Congratulations, Eve on your win.

Silent One July 18, 2018 at 1:48 PM This is lovely Eve..

Michelle Faulkner July 17, 2018 at 2:51 PM Love the contrast of tangerine and yellow to all the descriptions of blue, very moving!

Lyric Man July 17, 2018 at 5:04 AM Hi Eve.. This is so beautiful and natural in its smart and skillful flow.. that was also an incredible picture!

Tom Cunningham July 16, 2018 at 5:45 PM A deep well written verse Eve with a beautiful picture to accompany it. Tom

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2018 at 5:22 PM Eve, maybe you went over on the word count. and I saw a typo (unless there is a word called bice). Except for that, this is so gorgeous, I think it would be deserving of a great win. Eve Roper July 16, 2018 at 7:54 PM The word count on soup was 79 and on How Many Syllables was 80. Thank you for your wonderful compliment, I think what went wrong was I fell to read the instructions properly and he wanted an emotional write. But, I am not going to question the sponsor is always right they know what they are looking for. Eve Roper July 16, 2018 at 7:47 PM Thank you Tom, that is right.. Tom Cunningham July 16, 2018 at 5:42 PM Bice, is a word Andrea, from the French bis. A darkish colour of green or blue pigment.