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Endless Horizon

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Beautiful day, towards the endless horizon a tangerine and yellow sunlight's heart has burst with a vibrant bright capri and azure skies, as shadowed zaffre rolling ships meet the silent bice cerulean horizon. Extending giving way to the clear mirror bleu de france sea denim shadows and the scent of salt. Into the captivating beautiful smudges of coral, lavender, turquoise, oceans' depths that cannot compare; to the deep-sea creatures that prefer to remain that lures divers into their depths. 7/16/2018 Bice, from the French bis, originally meaning dark-coloured, is a green or blue pigment made from basic copper carbonate. Poetry Contest:Any July 2018 Poem- ' Contest Info Sponsored by: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 6:37:00 PM

,Back again to congratulate you again. Beautiful imagery.

Constance La France

Date: 8/10/2018 2:00:00 PM

Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing write and I love the image too!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/9/2018 9:50:00 PM

Your poem's colorful imagery is endlessly enchanting, Eve. Congratulations on your excellent win with your spectacular piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Gondolf

Date: 8/9/2018 9:23:00 PM

Eve, congrats on your win for this lovely verse. John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/9/2018 8:57:00 PM

Color this poem DAZZLING, Eve! Wow! Congrats on your win in the contest! :) gw

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/21/2018 7:23:00 AM

Congrats Eve on your first place win.

Gary Smith

Date: 7/21/2018 3:05:00 AM

Beautifully written Eve, congrats :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/20/2018 11:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. A beautiful poem with imagery that painted a picture in my mind. Enjoyed. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/19/2018 1:32:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve on your win.

Silent One

Date: 7/18/2018 1:48:00 PM

This is lovely Eve..

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/17/2018 2:51:00 PM

Love the contrast of tangerine and yellow to all the descriptions of blue, very moving!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/17/2018 5:04:00 AM

Hi Eve.. This is so beautiful and natural in its smart and skillful flow.. that was also an incredible picture!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/16/2018 5:45:00 PM

A deep well written verse Eve with a beautiful picture to accompany it. Tom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2018 5:22:00 PM

Eve, maybe you went over on the word count. and I saw a typo (unless there is a word called bice). Except for that, this is so gorgeous, I think it would be deserving of a great win.

Eve Roper
Date: 7/16/2018 7:54:00 PM

The word count on soup was 79 and on How Many Syllables was 80. Thank you for your wonderful compliment, I think what went wrong was I fell to read the instructions properly and he wanted an emotional write. But, I am not going to question the sponsor is always right they know what they are looking for.

Eve Roper
Date: 7/16/2018 7:47:00 PM

Thank you Tom, that is right..

Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/16/2018 5:42:00 PM

Bice, is a word Andrea, from the French bis. A darkish colour of green or blue pigment.