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H Form - Hybronnet Poetry Contest 
 Sponsored by: Constance La Francewritten 9/9/2024

Endless Ebony Garden of Stars POTD

"To lay awake and watch the galaxy slowly move, memories stored unlocked, a touch of existence." Quote by poet An endless ebony garden of stars, Galaxy humming wonder earthly ours. Ancient significant source of power, A warm celestial kept in earthen jars. To stand in gesture wavering flower. Tall scattered shadowed trees gaze upon bliss. A touch of autumn breeze, a breath, a kiss, Untimely morning rendezvous like thieves. A now sanctified world now quite submiss, Transient nature sits under flirting leaves. Within thy breast a promise earth strong might, Quelled waft and sounds blow through the hours of night. Reflective flow of spring beside banks end Thrilling sublime sights and whispers descend.
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La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the quote, and congrats on POTD, Constance
Agustin Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 3:45 PM
Hello Eve :-) What a beautifully enjoyed read!!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win. Hooray!!!  It was great to read your lovely/wonderful ~ write/quote yet again. Have a blessed day with your win..................
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Great poem. Congrats on your POTD.
Meadows Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 11:36 PM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina
Nicole Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 7:18 PM
' A touch of autumn breeze, a breath, a kiss. ' A magical moment, indeed. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe, my sweet friend. I feel like I'm floating on a star. :) Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 1:01 PM
- Once again... congratulations on this wonderful p.o.t.d., Eve :) - So beautifully described :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:02 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Romios Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 12:14 PM
An awesome write Eve.this piem belongs right up with the beaty of the heavens. Congratulaions on receiving the POTD Princess, Pangie
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:02 PM
Thank you my dear friend.
Buch Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on the POTD honour. Transpired to another world. Pleasure reading.
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Thank you, Jeta.
Elliott Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 8:58 AM
A nocturnal beauty of a poem, Eve. A big Congratulations on a grand POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day. Blessings :)
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thank you, Regina.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful ~ write/quote again. Have a blessed day enjoying your win..............
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Kaufman Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Dear Eve, Congratulations on POTD for the crafting of this challenging form of poetry, Hybronnet. "a warm celestial kept in earthen jars". Outstanding write!!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Seeker Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:19 AM
‘flirting leaves’ ~ enjoyed this delightful Hybronnet. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Eve
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Rodgers Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Dear Eve, I am back an so excited that you got POTD! Congratulations on such a wonderful poem! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Just beautiful Eve! Congratulations on your POTD honors, enjoy your day xxoo
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Mike.
Kitchin Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Eve, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
May Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 3:11 AM
Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on POTD
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Beautiful poetry Eve, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Feeley Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 1:48 AM
What an excellent way to invite us into this delightful space. Thanks
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Buch Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on the POTD honour! Wonderfully crafted vivid imagery!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Jeta.
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Congratulations to you Eve on today's POTD honour Tom
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Lovely imagery! Congratulations on your potd honor!
Roper Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Thank you my very dear friend.
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