Endless Dance:

In darkness of night

Nocturnal creatures delight

Rise the sleeping dawn

Rest now the stars of the night

The endless dance continues

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Line Gauthier

October 26, 2018 at 11:29 PM

Awesome poetry, White Wolf.

Lisa Ricci

May 7, 2017 at 3:01 PM

Good Morning White Wolf. The Tanka is in true form. The theme is marvelous and timeless. Your words are stunning and make the format come alive. Thus to this in honor of love and the darkness of night I say "So let it be said so let it be written so let it be done." I loved this entry. Well done entirely.

White Wolf

May 7, 2017 at 4:38 PM

Thank you very much, Lisa /|\

Lenna Walker

May 4, 2017 at 10:48 PM

The circle of life comes to mind, this says a lot with few words. I like it a lot :)

White Wolf

May 4, 2017 at 10:52 PM

Thank you, Lenna! I enjoy these forms that have a strict syllable count! /|\

Probir Gupta

May 3, 2017 at 7:51 AM

A dance worthy of watching in a trance ....

White Wolf

May 3, 2017 at 7:56 AM

I haven't induced one of those for a while, far too long actually! Indeed it would be, Probir, thank you /|\

Phil Capitano

May 3, 2017 at 6:52 AM

There is a rhythm of life to this lycanthropic piece. Well done.

White Wolf

May 3, 2017 at 6:55 AM

Sorry, Phil! That comment jumped up into yours then! Haha! Silly machine! Thank you very much mate for your kind words /|\

White Wolf

May 3, 2017 at 6:53 AM

Frank, you handsome devil! I am overwhelmed by your gracious comment! This poem I owe to you, for it was your beautiful words that inspired this write. Thank you bro /|\