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Endless- difficult to understand
when everything around us has an end.
All life on earth is destined to disband
with time and age- on that, we can depend.

We comprehend that most things are finite-
not only life- but what's constructed too.
For time corrodes to leave its deathly blight-
on sites that disappear from fields of view.

But endless is applied to those unknowns
that spin beyond our tiny Earthly realm.
The stars and cosmos offer secret zones,
as signs of endless spread- and overwhelm.

Still, to comprehend an endless state,
envisioning no borders that confine,
is hard to comprehend and estimate;
there is no end beyond its own design.

What if there was a box that held it all-
our Universe and others spinning on-
beyond that, what? Another endless sprawl?
We cannot vision endlessness as gone. 

February 11, 2023

~1st Place~
Contest: Writing Challenge - E Word
Sponsor: Constance La France
Judged: 02/14/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/21/2023 9:48:00 AM
Sandra, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, I like the image too, blessings, Constance
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/21/2023 12:36:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for another great contest. I appreciate your supportive words and nice placement very much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/15/2023 12:42:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2023 5:29:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Beata, with your supportive comment, and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/12/2023 4:55:00 PM
Very nice, Sandra. "Beyond that, what?" Well, you have given something to mull over the various possibilities.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/13/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Abdul, for your visit and supportive comment! Much appreciated! Yes, "endless" is a concept that is difficult to imagine.
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