End of the Voyage

dusky land calling
heavenly lighthouse stands tall.......
end of the voyage


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Placement: 7th; (February 2011)

Contest:What My Eyes See

Sponsor:Annalise Brigham

By:kashinath karmakar (23rd Feb.2011)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations Kashinath, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Hello Kashinath, Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. This is lovely As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Awesomel job, Kashinath great to see you in the top ten, near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 7th place honored win! Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Taylor Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Kashinath. Nice going. Ralph
K. Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:28 AM
way to go, Kashinath :) happy to see this among the winners :) congrats!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:34 AM
Congrats Kashinath on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
Mannan Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:16 AM
Super thought and image Kashinath.many warm congrats for this success.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Hey, Kash, you are racking up points now in the contests. Keep up the great work, and congratulations for your win here tonight.
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Very nice, Kashinath. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations on your very fine 7th Place Win in my contest, Kashinath! Thanks for the support. Always, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Magnificent words.. good luck in the contest Kashinath .. a great depiction of the photo.. impressive ..with luv..
Fraser Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Wonderful capture of the image for the contest, good luck Kashinath....:)
George   Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Ahhhh! Exceptional Haiku, my friend. Lainie
Falotico Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:40 AM
This is an amazing view you have penned.. Im sure it shall stand out among the rest as always...luv Michael
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 10:16 PM
soupmail coming (on comments you made)!
K. Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:20 PM
ah I different point of view and still beautifully written-- way to go :)
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Wow a terrific read.Good luck with this one.Thanks for your kind comments.~Teresa~
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 1:33 PM
You have written with quite a different perspective, Kashinath.I just received your comments on my poem. Where are you located at? Not India because there it is the dead of time around 3.00 a.m.
Neels Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 3:18 AM
Hey there Kash, I love this entry of yours.. Good luck for Annalise's contest..:) Thank you for all your comments as well :)btw that piece of mine was just called "infinite wisdom" did you read the comments?
Onclaud Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 12:13 AM
oh yes.. powerful, shining work, kashi.. whoot! best winning luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 11:02 PM
Kash, thanks for all your comments today . It's just after midnight. Can you believe my goal had been 10:30 or 11??
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 9:23 PM
wow, you are rolling out these japanese forms, kash. I sure like this one too. all flowing together so well and with your own unique interpretation of that picture!
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative write..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Yes Shar I write poems for fun and to bring smile to others' face.
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