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End of the Month Blues

I've got no money ba da da da....
Need me a Tiffany bauble
To brighten my day. Da da da da....

Can't order nothing 
My credit is over drawn Da da da da
Got three strings on my guitar and my TUNE IS FLAT

Sing with me now---Da Da Da Daaaaaa!!

I got the end of the month blues
Got no money blues
Got the gray sky blues.....Ba da da da!!!

Whistle now....

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Copyright © Doris Culverhouse | Year Posted 2011

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Caryl Muzzey Date: 8/17/2011 2:08:00 PM I've had those blues many a time. Great write Doris, I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 8/12/2011 12:42:00 PM Let me tune that guitar for you, then I'll sing alang! A fun, creative write, Doris! Da da da da! xoxo Robert. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/12/2011 12:04:00 AM but u don't got the poetry blues Doris ..this is so fun and so terrific .. and all can relate to the end of the month blues... oh ..only getting worse..it seems.. hope u get that guitar string ..luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/11/2011 11:34:00 PM and also the cop dying to get in his quota will stop you on the freeway last day of the dang month!!! Inevitably. hahaha. Good one, Doris. Login to Reply

Katie Telling Date: 8/11/2011 9:09:00 PM This is great! It especially speaks to me because singing and writing songs with my guitar is my hobby, and I'm broke too! :) Well done! And thanks so much for your comment on my poetry!! Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 8/11/2011 7:19:00 PM Oh my!!! What a grinner! Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 8/10/2011 12:00:00 PM Oh I'm singing with you Doris! Ba da da da!!! :-( :-] :-> :-) :-) :-) :-) From sadness to smiles Because of you! Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/9/2011 10:31:00 PM You aren't the only one Doris. I'm trying the Readers Digest Sweepstakes. There's gotta be another way. Login to Reply

John Smith Date: 8/9/2011 5:11:00 PM I'll sing with you, Doris. In this economy you could get vast numbers to sing along. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/9/2011 1:21:00 PM Sorry that this is happening in your life..Sometimes we live from one pay period to another..We forget to ration it out over that period so that we will have a little over time..Made a good poem..Made me think of Nannow..He would always say well at least the bills are paid for another month and we can stay here or the food is bought and we can eat..Mom Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 8/9/2011 9:56:00 AM haha well at least your'e singing about it. Doris. hope payday comes soon so you can end this blues tune da da ba da Login to Reply