Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

End of Summer

End of Summer

Glorious Summer was great fun while it lasted,
With sweltering sun, I turned super tan and almost toasted.
Now it’s high time to end this heat bummer,
‘Cause I’ve had enough of another sizzling summer.

Almost dehydrated, I have been panting and sweating,
And I’m tired of using fans and other forms of air-conditioning.
I look forward to naturally cool days and crispy nights,
Wearing light jackets, sexy booties, and colorful tights.

Wild wind whipping my hair and stroking my cheeks,
I welcome the seasons changing in the upcoming weeks. 
Leaves exchanging colors of green for hues of oranges and browns,
I’m ready to embrace exhilarating awesome Autumn!

08-31-2014

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Mark Trichet September 2, 2014 at 9:23 PM Loved it Pandita! However my wife's sexy booties are done and dusted for the season down here in Oz... Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 9:42 PM Hey Mark, thank you for your nice visit and compliments! Your wife is a girl after my own heart:-) - she is ready for the season!! Warmest regards. Pandita

Casarah Nance September 2, 2014 at 7:13 PM Sexy Booties....and that is why yours is the poem of the day! :) I loved you poem, what fun to read, it geeks me up and revs me for the season, we got the autumn paint starting to brush the trees and I dig it. grats on your fab poem :) hugs Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 8:37 PM I am so happy that you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments that I truly appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Maurice Yvonne September 2, 2014 at 5:34 PM great choice for poem of the day. congratulations Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 8:38 PM Maurice, thank you so very much for visiting and for complimenting me on this piece! It means a lot to me, my friend! Pandita

Brenda Swing September 2, 2014 at 5:25 PM Very well written,:) I hope I get there xo Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 8:23 PM Thank you so much, Brenda for stopping by with a sweet compliment. I assure you that it won't be long before you are in this place as you are already on the right path with writes such as "Time Bomb," for example. Best wishes to you! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 1:40 PM - Pandita - a poem that deserved to be on this page - Beautiful! - Congrats! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 8:30 PM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise for your congratulations and kind support! Pandita

Tim Smith September 2, 2014 at 1:26 PM Beautiful piece Pandita ......congrats Tim Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 8:40 PM Thanks Tim, I hope you are doing well! I appreciate your continued support and encouragement. Thank you so much! Pandita

Robert Lindley September 2, 2014 at 10:05 AM Pandita, congrats on your fine write being chosen for Poem of the Day. It was a very enjoyable read this fine morn!!! Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 11:01 AM I thank you, dear friend, for kindly complimenting my work! Have a wonderful day, Robert! Pandita

Jan Allison September 2, 2014 at 8:19 AM Love the transition from summer into Autumn - a wonderful write full of great description fantastic to see it as poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 9:24 AM Hi Jan, thank you so much for your great compliments which I appreciate! Have a nice day! Pandita

Eileen Manassian September 2, 2014 at 6:23 AM :) Nice one, Pandita! :) Congrats on being Poem of the Day with this lovely write. Yes, I feel the same way you have described, but I want Summer to stay a little longer. Going to Cyprus for two weeks to get my tan going! Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 9:27 AM Thanks very much, Eileen for your compliments and congratulations. I do hope that the weather cooperates during your trip to Cyprus and that you get some good Sun every day!!! Have a great time! Take care. Pandita

Verlena S. Walker September 2, 2014 at 3:40 AM Superlative Pandita. Super=awesome write enjoy. Congratulations on be chosen as poem of the day! Verlena Pandita Sietesantos September 2, 2014 at 9:23 AM Hi Verlena, I thank you kindly for your compliments and for letting me know the good news that my poem was chosen as poem of the day! I really didn't know about that - so thank you again! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala September 1, 2014 at 10:32 PM Beautiful write - I enjoyed reading this lovely piece! Kika Pandita Sietesantos September 1, 2014 at 10:34 PM Kika, thank you so very much - I really appreciate your compliments! Pandita

Bronwyn Matthew September 1, 2014 at 3:55 PM Lovely poem made me feel very cool and relaxed. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Is there a way of communicating with other poets that I dont know about? Im still getting the hang of the site. What do I do if I want to reply to someone directly? ScottishLassie x Pandita Sietesantos September 1, 2014 at 5:54 PM Hi Bronwyn, I am really happy to hear from you and to receive your wonderful compliments! If you want to reply privately to someone, you can use the PoetrySoup SoupMail or you can look above one of the poet's pieces, and you can click on "email." Hope that helps. Pandita

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2014 at 1:33 PM Dear Pandita, I was swept away in the coolness of fall you describe so beautifully in this poem. How I long for lower temperatures! It'll be at least November before it cools off in Florida, though. Just have to "sweat" it out. Literally. Thank you for sharing this refreshing breath of autumn with me. Love, Carolyn Pandita Sietesantos September 1, 2014 at 5:44 PM Hi Carolyn, thanks for stopping by and complimenting this piece! It was so beautiful out today with previews of coming autumnal attractions as petals from Crepe Myrtle trees were blown away by the wind - just beautiful! Fondest regards! Pandita

David Brown August 31, 2014 at 8:06 PM Very nice, Pandita! Loved the flow and the ending is wonderful. Pandita Sietesantos August 31, 2014 at 9:54 PM David, thank you so very much for visiting and for enjoying this piece! It means a lot to me, my friend! Pandita

Deb Wilson August 31, 2014 at 7:05 PM Really great tale of the change of Summer into Fall...love, Deb Pandita Sietesantos August 31, 2014 at 9:51 PM Thanks very much, dear Deb, for complimenting my work. Have a nice weekend! Pandita