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End Line : Oh For a Smile .

Some , believe that rich folk have made    ... IT

And never need worry about what a thing  ....COSTS

Sadly , many of these people have absolutely..NOTHING

Except the trappings ,  which  they  cling     ... TO

Poor me ,with just a fun pen and a readymade ..SMILE .



Inspired for D-A end line contest by Iolanda's humour blog .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:39:00 PM

Yep, here is another one I recall. Let me go a little farther back.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/8/2011 7:02:00 AM

Hi Sean. Time now for a bit of reading as work is scarce. Great piece this and cleverly done. Eamon

Brian Strand

Date: 5/5/2010 7:24:00 AM

Trust your smile has returned after the disappointing result in France ,at least in consolation Rory broke his duck in the USA.For us yesterday a dubliner and the rain saved the day in the WI .Clearly its not only here that rain can ruin a World Tournament.Thanks for your kind comments Sean.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/11/2010 6:24:00 AM

I love this one. Soupmail

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2010 12:19:00 PM

For someone who says this is his least favorite form of poetry.. u have done it proud Sean.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is Fairy Tales.. appreciate your comments on my blog and OH that lovely little limerick poem too.. will treasure it Sean.. thankxxx... appreciate your input.. very valued.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2010 9:31:00 PM

I think this is one of the better end line entries, Sean. Very well done! andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 2/21/2010 8:17:00 AM

Not much if you are watching Johno's 15 especially if you have paid to be there.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/19/2010 1:27:00 AM

Thank you for your comment on my blog "Humor in Poetry"

David Byrne

Date: 2/17/2010 8:30:00 PM

but wait until you are published and filthy rich!

Date: 2/17/2010 3:23:00 PM

And you have me smiling with you. Nice message in this End Line Word poem. I'm sure HG and Dane Ann will love it. I hope this form takes off. It would be fun to have it added to the Soup form list. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2010 9:43:00 AM

Some of the richest people don't seem to know how to smile. Obviously, material wealth cannot bring us the type of joy that a "fun pen" can! Excellent end-line poem, Sean. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 2/17/2010 1:29:00 AM

Well you certainly achieve that here Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & valued kind words