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End and Beginning

at life’s night time kiss: soul enters oblivion, mates with universe

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 7:49:00 PM

thankxx Jack for your lovely sweet words of comment on my poetry ..much appreciated my friend..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/24/2011 6:06:00 PM

A beautiful write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2011 12:30:00 PM

Very creative and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read..Enjoyed very much..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I am doing extremely well to have had surgery..I am going to post a blog sometimes today..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2011 11:58:00 AM

Very deep write here:Enjoyed-kashinath

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/24/2011 7:37:00 AM

It#s a pity that we don't have more space left on PS. Would be much better! Anyway, I really liked your Tanka very much, a lovely piece so is this Haiku! Have a great day!...Love, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/24/2011 7:35:00 AM

Dear Jack, thank you for your note and well wishing! Here are the texts of the German and Spanish translation of your part: Zarte Liebesblüten fallen Nur nackte dornige Zweige bleiben Kein berauschender Duft mehr Doch mit Pflege und Liebe Wird aus einer Rose ein Bouquet Pétalos de amor caen Dejando lampiñas ramas espinosas No más embriaga perfume Pero con cuidado y atención Crece de una rosa un ramillete Please note: The translations have different syllable to the Tanka-norm

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2011 12:20:00 AM

love the imagery, jack. enjoyed. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2011 11:10:00 PM

wow,Jack, this one is impressive! I think you have a good shot at placing!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2011 5:28:00 PM

Very creative work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck....From the ones that I have read it is going to be hard choosing for Rick..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you taking the time to comment..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2011 2:32:00 PM

A wonderful haiku Jack, forever with a love one sounds good,,, take care,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2011 12:22:00 PM

beautifully worded haiku with apt images, jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 10:48:00 AM

Wow, this is extraordinary, Jack!! If it is for the contest, it's definitely a winner. So deep! I love the concept the soul mating with the universe. This is how I feel when I stare at the night sky or even when looking at the ocean. Brilliant poem! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2011 10:23:00 AM

very nice, jack, if for contest, best of luck~~

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/23/2011 10:11:00 AM

Great Haiku, Jack! I am glad that you like my words and if you'll send me yours, I'll do the translation into German and Spanish. Sorry to hear that you need a hair transplant and liposuction. I have problems with reflux but a surgical operation won't improve it so I relay on medication. Today ma arm was very painful again. Hope it will be better soon!...Wish you a great time!...Love, Gert:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2011 8:42:00 AM

thankxx Jack.. making u a favorite poet of mine right now luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2011 8:22:00 AM

Splendid write Jack.. luf that last line.. super title too.. good luck in the contest my friend.. vibrant take on the photo luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2011 8:18:00 AM

Reads like a winner...Good luck..Sara

Nancy Smith

Date: 3/23/2011 8:00:00 AM

Very nice...This is a style I am not to familiar with, but I have been dappling a little and have come up with a couple...Nice job.. Do you write Tanka too :-)