Encounter

A squirrel dashed in front of me,
An acorn in his mouth.
I was heading up the block;
He was going south.

He on four feet, I on two;
Each, though, in a hurry.
I’d increased my pace a bit;
He was all a’scurry.

I had many chores ahead;
Maybe he as well.
What a squirrel’s day is like
Is kinda hard to tell.

Still, we both were racing home
With breakfast on our minds – 
He, no doubt, an acorn,
One of his more precious finds.

I’d be having coffee
With some matzoh and some cheese,
Each of us anticipating
Food we hoped would please.

Yet, we’d shared a moment,
Like an urban tip of hat:
A species cross-connection
And c’mon, how nice is that?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/10/2012 8:35:00 PM
This is so cute, Ilene. A wonderful write. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:10:00 PM
Hi Ilene - Just love your sense of humor and the way you see the world! Always enjoy reading your poetry. - Gail
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:37:00 PM
ok, now for the poem. HOW darling is THIS? I love how you think!!!! and hey, let's throw that little guy some nacho flavored sunflower seeds!!
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:36:00 PM
Hi, Ilene, first about the seeds, I also enjoy pumpkin ones if I didn't tell you already. As for the shells, I always carry a container with me when I eat mine. I have even snuck seeds into the movies eating them thru the whole show with my little container and lid. Heaven help me if they spill!!!
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Date: 4/10/2012 5:58:00 AM
What a great story, same with rhythm and rhyme! Lovely ordinary happening embellished with such a special connection.
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