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Enchantress, 1915, Konstantin Somov

I swallow smitten smoke
stomach the wake of verve ~
a corseted coherence
craving night’s clemency
while the sun sleeps
lips pressed to the searing chalice
intoxicated by silver essence ~
     my fragile fragrance

You name my soul,
an enamored enchantress
the touch that craves not
a thousand thirsty eyes ~
misinterpreting inner magic
confusing compassionate
curves with consent carved
but I am not your temptress
nor am I a mystique
clothed in mists of memories
marooned in manipulation

I never ached to be the allure ~
bound to every burn
wading to savor my secrets
the intriguing incense
intricately kissing the cashmere air
the scent of the soul’s need

O spirit, guarding my light,
seek me as I am ~
an enigma, unfelt,
studying the silhouette
s i m m e r i n g
in crimson and copper
for the mirror
resembles threefold silence
wanting to be the destiny
not the dancing desire
dissolving into the drunken depths
of candle-lit dusk ~
your breathless incantation
a hypnotic haze
hand-woven into thin lace of love…

        I am more than
your skies’ beholding ~
I am heaven’s eternal poetry
a pulse 
           no palm can possess...
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Parker Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Whether through personality or flesh beauty is always chased, humans are very strange creatures whose desires may outweigh their sense of noble understanding to admire without intrusion especially when they believe someone is an attraction to be sought and not a normal human being to show compassion and understanding to, my first thought after reading your poem, Ink
Hind Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 7:02 PM
I don't know how you come up with so much alliteration ALL the time, beautiful everytime. "an enigma, unfelt, studying the silhouette s i m m e r i n g in crimson and copper"
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 11:04 PM
Awwn youv remained a constant sweetness! Sending you light my sweet paige
Borg Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on another win, Empress. Your trophy shelf must be creaking by now! 3000 views? Lets make it 3000 trophies!
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 11:00 PM
Hahah your comments leave me in stitches! You are sent for that i think dear Pascal! 😂 Im now a bit intrigued to count my trophies 😂 On allpoetry I have over 120 golden trophies... easy because they mention on top of my page. If only soup would do that too, But trophies do not define our value. I tend to writ when inspired. I will read you shortly Hahah checking on my trophy shelf 😂 Sending you warm light my friend
Sharma  Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 5:59 AM
loved reading this special poem and I seeeee there's a celebration going on, 3000 views wohooooo ~ 🥂🌙🧚👀🫂💫 ppl are watching! ma sweet fairy goddess, keep shininnn and writinnn tonsz of love and hugsz 🧜‍♀️ 🧚 🌊 🍁
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 11:01 PM
I saw your views too! Well I see both our poems are on google search engine for some reason! They went viral haha 💃 How strange is it! Our feelings turned into poetry Somehow goes viral 😱
Sharma  Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 5:57 AM
"You name my soul, an enamored enchantress the touch that craves not a thousand thirsty eyes ~ misinterpreting inner magic confusing compassionate curves with consent carved" yes tell them that we don't need their delusive attention to realise the worth of our souls! And inner magic is something that can't be perceived by those who are not fluent in the language of spiritual empathy.. I just love all that you've conveyed here and especially that ending.. a pulse no palm can possess.. absolutely!
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 11:03 PM
Yes tellin them wont help. Cus we live in a thirsty world my angelic star! Some might think you are too young to understand these things but trust me i know, you are wise beyond your age! Im lucky to have you Hugsziez
Sharma  Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Wow you really are the ekphrasis queen my dear Inkzyzzzz!!! I absolutely adore how you've extracted the essence of the artwork and this has absolutely enchanted my soul ~ i love the descriptions throughout and the way you've layered the imagery in such a stellar manner that moves the heart "a corseted coherence craving night’s clemency while the sun sleeps lips pressed to the searing chalice" Love that! Also the wordplay throughout is so meticulous! The alliterations, adjectives and everything
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:24 PM
You are a wonder at this Ekphrasis poetry form, Inky. I love how you represented that part of the picture of the mirror behind her head (as threefold silence) beautiful and profound, sweetie
Liguori Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 6:11 AM
We will start slow; I will first introduce you to the metaphor. 😝
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:48 AM
Yes sure I need also poetry lessons 😂
Liguori Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:45 AM
Remember Ink that I beat you in the contest so I anticipate 4,000 views on my poem.
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Lol thank you sweet soul aunt! I am a bit spooked by the views on this poem! 3000 views 😳 lol gosh! Strange! I bet its on some search engine and many are viewing this poem: Appreciate you always Sending you light Long day plus Time for a new pedicure 😆
DiMino Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:51 PM
We seldom see clearly, what things really are; more we see, the outside as what is inside of ourselves. What we see is a reflection of our own summaries and desires. Some skin deep beauty, goes clear down to the soul. But man does not have the patience to travel that far, seldom committed after the top layer. Nor has man the infinite enchantment of spiritual beauty that God invested in each His precious beings. Beauty through and through. Great poetry. Splendid, deep poetic sense and imagery. Masterful.
Empress Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:32 AM
Wow your response is so very impressive. As a man yourself ~ you speak truth. And many when they see beyond the top layer, freak out, and run ~ as thats what they know, or maybe start questioning what they discover, and start placing also labels. Ive seen all that. Raw emotions of women are considered unfortunately as toxic, never understood ~ I would like to read this comment again later to reflect dear Jo. Thank you for sharing your wisdom I will read you soon ish too Sending you light always
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:09 AM
Interesting read! Have a nice day ~ AA
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:50 AM
Thank you dear AA. Sending you light
Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:33 AM
Dear Empress, so fiercely empowering response to Konstantin Somov’s classic 1915 portrait. Somov’s historical piece often risks trapping its subject in the voyeur’s frame, a static object of decorative desire, corseted for the viewer's gaze. I believe you have taken that canvas and given the woman inside it a lethal, resplendent voice. I just love how you dismantle the trope of the passive "temptress" and replace it with a sovereign soul that refuses to be owned. Empress, what a great read this morning, that is deeply atmospheric, structurally sound, and intellectually uncompromising Fav. Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:49 AM
Owned by one and only psychedelic fire ~ thank you so much dear Daniel Sending you light always ~
Smith  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:26 AM
A lush, sensuous ekphrasis that turns Somov’s enchantment into a powerful declaration of personhood. The rich alliteration, incense-and-candlelight imagery, and spacious visual lineation create an almost spellbound atmosphere, while the repeated refusals of possession give the poem a deeply resonant, self-possessed core.
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:54 AM
Sometimes even AI cant understand what I am saying... theres only few who can feel what I flow. This one isnt sensuous but rather about women who are misunderstood ~ and their smiles and curves mistaken for consent. So here I am saying never did I ask for such attention. And I long to be seen for who I am. But I appreciate your kind support Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:23 AM
‘but I am not your temptress nor am I a mystique’… I guess somethings you may not be, but you ARE absolutely amazing. These other commenters can try their best, but they’ll never top me (your #1 fan). As long as you are writing… I will be reading. Wonderful poem Ink, as always.
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:27 AM
Awwn thats nice to know! well you are too kind dear Robert I am sincerely honored Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:15 AM
swallow smitten smoke stomach .. corseted coherence craving night’s clemency… yeaaaaas u alliteration poetessss… bound to every burn oooo chiiild … wading to savor my secrets.. mm this weave making me crave papi!!! I’m thinkkiiiiin something savory to savor !!! the intriguing incense intricately kissing the cashmere air the scent of the soul’s need.. absolutely mesmerized by the breathlessness of your flowww papi… the destiny not the dancing desire dissolving into the drunken depths.. well papi .. I tell u .. I am deeply dissolved n dancing in ur desire aee.. I am more than your skies’ beholding .. ooo yess tell em child!!! I am heaven’s eternal poetry a pulse no palm can possess... oooooo the ending hits like a bolder !!!!! Freaking magical piece!!!
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:32 AM
I give up on you papi
Onpaper Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:31 AM
It’s ok .. think of it as a feminine fart 😂😂😭
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:30 AM
Yikes I almost threw up! You know i am too feminine fragile for such words hahah
Onpaper Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:28 AM
Oh I am for sure gonna do some brain farts on this !!!! 🦖😂🤣
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Awwwn thank you papi, you are so sweet! Waiting for your take on this artpiece! 🥸
Lane Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:14 AM
Our life is owned by no one but ourselves. You've written this in a way that no one can doubt the statement you're making. At least your mirror was silent and didn't say you weren't the fairest one of all. 😊 I couldn't help myself from writing that. I'm sleep deprived this morning, Ink. Seriously... Love can be as delicate as lace. It tatters and falls apart, and yet it's such a beautiful fabric.
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:19 AM
Your wisdom made me pause and reflect linnersz, poetry mama! Thank you for your very thoughtful comment ~ sometimes so many mistake smiles for consent, while compassion means something.. unfortunate reality of many women. Sending you light I appreciate you 💋
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:55 AM
Haha we couldn't have written more different 😅 I think I used crayon 😂
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:21 AM
I died reading you papi! No recovery hahahahahha
Onpaper Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Hahahahah oh yes yes … I’m just about to grab my pen … spread my limbs to 4 different continents and start brain farting ae !!!! It’s comiiiiing children!!!! 😂
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:27 AM
Knowing her she will bedazzle with confetti bold black 😂
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:26 AM
Woohoo go Lioness! (In marker pen please haha 😅)
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:14 AM
Now waiting for Lioness to write and post 🥱 😂 yours is gouache 😱
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:03 AM
It's on my page, they update the list hourly now!
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:01 AM
Hahah where is yours!! Post!!!
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:59 AM
I'll be crying in crayon when I NA 😅
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:56 AM
Hahah I used acrylic tears!!
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:53 AM
Faved.
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:53 AM
I'm speechless!
G  Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:53 AM
🏆
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:55 AM
Won already! Haha cus the queen said so! Gosh did i just receive three comments 😱
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