Premiere Contest WinnerEnchanted House


My Childhood Home


My lovely childhood home, I miss it so...
built Eighteen Eighty-Six, so long ago.

Three floors, all rooms with mantled fireplaces; 
carved woodwork, archways, spindled winding stair;
cathedral ceilings, sparkling chandelier
in dining room enjoyed on holidays.
Third floor not used but built with parkay floors
and doors that opened to small balconies.
Off the front door, a porch wrapped 'round two sides...
was like a fairy tale when I was young.
 
Such lovely grounds; garage with two horse stalls
and covered sleigh with velvet seats of red.
White gravel paths with gardens either side;
the rolling lawn, majestic tall pine trees
and rippling stony brook below the hill.
My childhood home fulfilled my childhood dreams– 
so happy there with my dear family.
Until I married, it was home to me.

And since home now is not too far from it– 
I often pass the site of my old house.
On left, before I pass under the bridge
that sprawls across the Hudson River now– 
the empty view brings sadness to my heart.
To build that bridge they tore my old home down– 
the only house to make this sacrifice– 
The vision of my childhood home is gone.

As I ride by I feel them wave to me...
the ghosts of past, and my dear family.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Enchanted House
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Judged: 05/23/2016

~1st Place~
Contest: A Child's First Home
Sponsor: Verlena S. Walker
Judged: 10/17/2015

Note: Newburgh-Beacon Bridge was completed and opened in November 1963
         New York State claimed our home via eminent domain and purchased it in 1960
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Flower Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:49 PM
This is awesome write, as always. Congrats on your top win, Sandra. ;)
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Thank you so much, Moon Flower. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Day Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Congrats on winning with an excellent poem! Jesse
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse! Sandra
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May 25, 2016 at 2:10 PM
A great congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much, BL. Sandra
Dutta Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Big Congrats to win the first place. Hugs
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha. Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Very beautifully written, congrats Sandra!
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
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May 24, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Brilliant write, congratulations Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thank you very much, Deepak. Sandra
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May 24, 2016 at 7:46 AM
Congrats Sandra on the win!!
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Thank you so much, Lukas. Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Sandra, great entry congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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May 24, 2016 at 2:00 AM
How sad for all of you Sandra. You describe your home with such detail, with imagery that almost breathes. Congratulations on winning first place Sandra. This poem is deserving of the honor. #7 ; ) Connie...it still won't let me post comments Sandra.
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May 23, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Sad and lovely! Congrats, Sandra! So sorry that your home was taken, dear one.
Haight Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thank you, Kim. Yes, it was sad for sure. Hugs, Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the first placement of the contest.
Haight Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Nayda, thank you for offering another great contest. I am so pleased and thankful for my awesome placement! Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Sandra, how fortunate to have lived in a house like this! A 7! Love , Balveen
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September 8, 2015 at 11:35 PM
oh, my , that is so sad, they just keep tearing everything up. Gosh, if this were my contest, I'd have to place this one really high. It is very well described with the perfect ending. Very CHARMING this house was.
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I really appreciate your encouraging comments so much. Sandra
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September 8, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Sandra, so tragically beautiful is your poem, your childhood home sounds very similar to mine, it was a heritage home and ours burned to the ground, nothing but ashes left, it only lives in my memory now, 7+ for this awesome write, and thanks for visiting my poem, Cecil . . .
Haight Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Broken, I guess we do share this loss in different ways, but nonetheless we both know how tragic it was in our lives. Thank you so much for your kind comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
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September 8, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Wonderful memories Sandra! How we long to cherish our past, Gl in contest!
Haight Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Thank you for your visit, Dr. Upma, and for your support. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 2:41 PM
beautifully penned Sandra - you still have wonderful memories ... it is so sad these things happen to satisfy what is seen as 'progress' :-( hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Thanks for your visit, Jan, and kind comment. Yes, memories are gifts for sure. Hugs, Sandra
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