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Enchanted House Premiere Contest Winner

My Childhood Home My lovely childhood home, I miss it so... built Eighteen Eighty-Six, so long ago. Three floors, all rooms with mantled fireplaces; carved woodwork, archways, spindled winding stair; cathedral ceilings, sparkling chandelier in dining room enjoyed on holidays. Third floor not used but built with parkay floors and doors that opened to small balconies. Off the front door, a porch wrapped 'round two sides... was like a fairy tale when I was young. Such lovely grounds; garage with two horse stalls and covered sleigh with velvet seats of red. White gravel paths with gardens either side; the rolling lawn, majestic tall pine trees and rippling stony brook below the hill. My childhood home fulfilled my childhood dreams– so happy there with my dear family. Until I married, it was home to me. And since home now is not too far from it– I often pass the site of my old house. On left, before I pass under the bridge that sprawls across the Hudson River now– the empty view brings sadness to my heart. To build that bridge they tore my old home down– the only house to make this sacrifice– The vision of my childhood home is gone. As I ride by I feel them wave to me... the ghosts of past, and my dear family. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Enchanted House Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 05/23/2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: A Child's First Home Sponsor: Verlena S. Walker Judged: 10/17/2015 Note: Newburgh-Beacon Bridge was completed and opened in November 1963 New York State claimed our home via eminent domain and purchased it in 1960

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Date: 5/28/2016 9:49:00 PM
This is awesome write, as always. Congrats on your top win, Sandra. ;)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Moon Flower. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 4:10:00 PM
Congrats on winning with an excellent poem! Jesse
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse! Sandra
Date: 5/25/2016 2:10:00 PM
A great congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, BL. Sandra
Date: 5/25/2016 11:07:00 AM
Big Congrats to win the first place. Hugs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anisha. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/24/2016 7:59:00 AM
Very beautifully written, congrats Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/24/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/24/2016 7:59:00 AM
Brilliant write, congratulations Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/24/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Deepak. Sandra
Date: 5/24/2016 7:46:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on the win!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/24/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lukas. Sandra
Date: 5/23/2016 10:32:00 PM
Sandra, great entry congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/24/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/24/2016 2:00:00 AM
How sad for all of you Sandra. You describe your home with such detail, with imagery that almost breathes. Congratulations on winning first place Sandra. This poem is deserving of the honor. #7 ; ) Connie...it still won't let me post comments Sandra.
Date: 5/23/2016 9:55:00 PM
Sad and lovely! Congrats, Sandra! So sorry that your home was taken, dear one.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/24/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Yes, it was sad for sure. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/23/2016 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the first placement of the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 10:07:00 PM
Nayda, thank you for offering another great contest. I am so pleased and thankful for my awesome placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/22/2015 1:17:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/18/2015 8:07:00 AM
Sandra, how fortunate to have lived in a house like this! A 7! Love , Balveen
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:35:00 PM
oh, my , that is so sad, they just keep tearing everything up. Gosh, if this were my contest, I'd have to place this one really high. It is very well described with the perfect ending. Very CHARMING this house was.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/9/2015 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I really appreciate your encouraging comments so much. Sandra
Date: 9/8/2015 7:02:00 PM
Sandra, so tragically beautiful is your poem, your childhood home sounds very similar to mine, it was a heritage home and ours burned to the ground, nothing but ashes left, it only lives in my memory now, 7+ for this awesome write, and thanks for visiting my poem, Cecil . . .
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/8/2015 8:09:00 PM
Broken, I guess we do share this loss in different ways, but nonetheless we both know how tragic it was in our lives. Thank you so much for your kind comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/8/2015 1:33:00 AM
Wonderful memories Sandra! How we long to cherish our past, Gl in contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/8/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, Dr. Upma, and for your support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/7/2015 2:41:00 PM
beautifully penned Sandra - you still have wonderful memories ... it is so sad these things happen to satisfy what is seen as 'progress' :-( hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/8/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Jan, and kind comment. Yes, memories are gifts for sure. Hugs, Sandra

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