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Enchanted Fall

walking down the stairs enchanted by her luring smile tripped, great was the fall broken arms and collar bone not to mention three teeth missing Be gentle Amy :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 1:34:00 PM
Next time watch where you going hehe. Thanks Sidney. Hope your weekend is a splendid one ;)
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Date: 10/16/2010 5:15:00 AM
Very witty and humrous entry for the contest- what a lure and what a fall-, Sidney
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:42:00 AM
the old slip and crack...
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:04:00 PM
the funny sight to any tanka.lol.. sorry my happy friend, never read humor in a tanka. Good job,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2010 7:51:00 PM
OH Sidney u are at it again making me smile so much with this funny Tanka.. what illusions I picture reading this in my mind of the enchanted fall u are taking in your lines.. good luck in the contest for Amy .. she will roll with laughter with this one luv..
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