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Empyrean Pantoum

While hosts of stars adorn the darkling night beyond the coverlet of day’s embrace neath firmament parading sparkling sight with show of heavens’ mystifying face, beyond the coverlet of day’s embrace the lunar orb may spread translucent rays with show of heavens’ mystifying face, though borrowed from the sun’s secreted gaze. The lunar orb may spread translucent rays upon telluric lodging where we dwell, though borrowed from the sun’s secreted gaze, in casting of an otherworldly spell. Upon telluric lodging where we dwell, our mortal role is played within a dream in casting of an otherworldly spell, as guests of earth that pass through cosmic stream. Our mortal role is played within a dream neath firmament parading sparkling sight, as guests of earth that pass through cosmic stream, while hosts of stars adorn the darkling night. ~ Harley White * * * * * * * * * The poem is a pantoum… A pantoum is a poem in a fixed form, consisting of a varying number of four-line stanzas with lines rhyming alternately; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated to form the first and third lines of the succeeding stanza, with the first and third lines of the first stanza forming the second and fourth of the last stanza, but in reverse order, so that the opening and closing lines of the poem are identical.

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Date: 12/23/2020 6:49:00 AM
Nicely penned, Harley. I find pantoums somewhat difficult to write and have the repeating lines make sense in the flow of the poem but you did this seamlessly. Happy holidays to you and yours. Hugs, John
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Harley White
Date: 4/28/2021 5:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment! Yes, pantoums are difficult as a form, but sometimes I enjoy the challenge of trying to write one. Sorry to be so late in responding...

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