Empty Void

I'll, no longer avoid this empty void. The torment, driving me insanely mad. Life long, memories forever destroyed. My soul, destined to be lonesome and sad. Quickly, my heart continues to grow cold. As, the misery slowly breaks me down. The damage done, no need to be consoled. Left, to show my shame through an endless frown. My demons, are now the ones in control. Ripping me apart from the inside out. Goaded, to condemn my sad darkened soul. No one, will ever hear me scream and shout. I start to mutter incoherently. No choice, but to wait for death patiently. 6/11/2017

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Date: 6/17/2017 10:04:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/18/2017 12:07:00 AM
I believe you might have me confused with someone else. But I truly appreciate the great comment and view :) Take care and God bless!!
Date: 6/12/2017 2:30:00 PM
This is a very sad poem.Written very well. I sort of see myself in this poem. I feel an empty void.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene :) I believe, there is a lot of us with empty voids!!
Date: 6/12/2017 1:48:00 PM
Such a sad sonnet, written perfectly.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth :)
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