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empty thoughts

between the stars, nothing's there much like a daydream's stare, an empty grave of dreams that decompose into...soulful sighs ~whispers that can almost be heard in a space full of everything we want to know - but fear to hear...

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Date: 11/8/2024 10:04:00 AM
Oooo... somewhat a cautionary warning... you don't know what you will become aware of, if you but stop and listen! Beautiful! Xo
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:29:00 PM
so true, so sharp, unique dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers.
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Date: 10/27/2024 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your Empty Thoughts! :D
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Date: 10/27/2024 2:27:00 PM
Very gothic and right up my street - didn't think I'd bump into you in my contest - excellent work :)
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Date: 10/24/2024 12:39:00 PM
Excellent piece, CC. Love the 2nd line. :o))
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Date: 10/24/2024 11:07:00 AM
Very deep Craig.. You always have wise and thought provoking take on the contests..
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Date: 10/24/2024 10:45:00 AM
Dear Craigsz, In few words youv expressed and delivered one that truly made me feel alot! “ an empty grave of dreams” that line! So good! I dont know how you come up with such lines but that line stood out for me, “ we want to know - but fear to hear.” so true, and so much wisdom and words of a poetic philosopher i see through this! I love this! As it resonates. As always evocative too. And is a fave! Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
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