Empty Nest Syndrome

I reckon the empty nest syndrome hits all at one time or another,
When youngsters flee the nest leaving dear old Dad and Mother!
This morning on the patio I witnessed this situation at its best,
When two baby wrens took flight and left their parent's cozy nest!

Mr. and Mrs. Wren set up housekeeping in a birdhouse I had made.
They soon became the proud parents of a couple of eggs she laid!
I watched them flit to and fro as they filled the ever-empty maws,
Of their little darlings from grub carried in their over-flowing craws!

Once the kids had spread their wings to experience the thrill of flight,
Mother Wren would sit on the birdhouse porch to contemplate her plight!
She'd plaintively chirp as if to say, "You ingrates left sans saying goodbye!
You've left me and your Pa in this lonely nest to mope about and cry!"

It wasn't long until Mr. Wren was in a romantic mood with his spouse.
When he tried to nuzzle up to Mrs. Wren, she'd scurry inside the house,
As if to say, "No way, buster!  I've had it!  Cool it until next spring!
Perhaps when the cherry blossoms bloom again we'll have another fling!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/25/2011 11:01:00 PM
From one bird watcher to another, its a great poem... she only went in her house to have more bird seed...food sometimes seems more important. Love the poem. lee
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Date: 7/22/2011 12:21:00 PM
cheered me up Bob, thanks for the explanation but anything to do with stringy glop!!! count me out, hahaha, have a great weekend Bob, David
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:27:00 AM
hahaha, great ending. Good "visual" or concrete example of empty nest syndrome!
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Date: 7/22/2011 7:45:00 AM
Tender and with humor. A wonderful verse that you have put together in your own very special style.
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Date: 7/22/2011 7:28:00 AM
Tender and with humor. A wonderful verse that you have put together in your own very special style.
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:27:00 PM
Cute observations of your neighbors, who probably didn't realize you were peeking. Liked it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:16:00 AM
empty nest syndrome. Feeling the effects of that today, Robert. Cool poem as always from your pen. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:14:00 PM
I remember with much touchy feelings when I had the Empty Syndrome as all my children left for North America when I was in India. Thanks for the feedback for this humrous yet touchy write. I wrote Empty Syndrome way back in 2000, Bob
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:22:00 PM
oh! my gosh... this was very good and funny.. I think this sounds like me..lol.. At one time i use to kid around with my x- and set dates every season... great one Bob~,..p.d.
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:21:00 PM
funny work!! you have a cheerful way of wwriting my friend.
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:55:00 PM
birds life with the wife, ya better cool it buster, the cats about, duck n shout methinks it looks like thunder... great story mr Hopeful. on ya blue, Don
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:17:00 PM
Mr. Wren has a long wait ahead of him! This is hilarious, Bob. I know some parents who wish their grown children would leave home. LOL Loved your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2011 1:12:00 PM
This is just too cute. Love the imgery and the personalities you gave ma and pa wren. Wonderful story line. This could actually be formatted to become a tale for children. Great job. God Bless, JB
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