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Why does it
A N N O Y
me so
when i take the
T I M E
to read a poet’s words
C H E W
them up with delight
only to find
that they rudely (my opinion)
T U R N E D
off their comments

my brain shuts down
with no
I N T E R -
action
a subtraction
of friendliness
insubstantial
P R O P R I E T Y

S O U P
meaty
and filled with
carrots, celery and onions
S H A R E D
with salty broth and bones
L A D L E D
out into countless bowls
S I P P E D
and warmed by the heart
with light
C O N V E R S A T I O N
like two people
sitting across a table

the metaphoric table
states, oceans, countries
B L E SS E D
and bountiful
S U CC E S S
of twining hands

turn politics off, yes
or craziness, yes
that
A L P H A B E T
duress
we can give a rest

but when a poem
is a flower
its honey
its bumblebee
W H Y
hide from me
and others too

Don’t make me chew
and sup with you
when you’ve
left the the table
with S T E A M I N G
S O U P

3/14/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/17/2022 10:47:00 AM
Is there even a human behind the words, when a turned off comments retains, but, a robotic feel to it, you have expressed the emotions one feels in a nutshell, and allowed us all to comment on it, a most clever write, Kim . . . : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thank you! ~ hugs!
Date: 3/15/2022 12:11:00 PM
This is a favorite for me Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 12:33:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 3/14/2022 7:41:00 PM
Great and well expressed feelings. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/15/2022 11:27:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/14/2022 10:10:00 AM
I want profile check boxes that say "Duckbilled platitudes only" || "Critical pace theories (rhyme/meter)" || "Winter of discontent (serious criticism)" :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2022 12:08:00 PM
:)
Date: 3/14/2022 9:09:00 AM
It is disappointing to see someone has turned off comments when we are ready to comment ! When two are seated across a table, it is impolite if one person leaves the table and walks away. You have expressed your disgust in a very pleasing way, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2022 9:47:00 AM
Disgust is a little harsh…just mild annoyance. lol
Date: 3/14/2022 6:35:00 AM
I agree, Kim. We need to have two-way communication to hone our skills and form friendships. We don't all need to be the same, differences just showcase uniqueness. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2022 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, Bill! I want to comment then find the person has turned off their commenting. I’m like ‘why did i read this.’ Blessings of friendship ~ Kim

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