Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson Poet Free verse

Empty Bottle

Taking me down 
To the fields of green
Along the brightest star
I've ever seen
Wait by the water
Till it hits the shore
To find an empty bottle
Nothing more



Name: Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson
Written: July 12, 2010
Contest: The Unwritten

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Wilma Neels July 3, 2011 at 7:39 AM Scarlett, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;-) Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson July 3, 2011 at 12:17 PM Thank you so much Wilma. I'm pleasantly surprised. I dont get to communicate with you guys as much cuz my computer is down. It was so great to hear from my old friends here at poetrysoup.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 3, 2011 at 4:58 AM Congrats Scarlett on your second place win with this intense poetry..how have u been luv? hope u are celebrating the 4th in style...with luv.. Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson July 3, 2011 at 12:19 PM Hello Ms Sweetheart - thank you for your kind comments. Been doing ok but am in the hospital right now. They have wi-fi woohoo! :) Getting my computer fixed soon so I can get back to my old friends here at poetrysoup. Hope your weekend is a great one!

Gert W. Knop July 18, 2010 at 9:33 AM Lovely written, enjoyed the reado today! Carry on with your good job! And thanks for your kind commenton "Roadside" I also posted it on my facebook album with a photo!...Have a nice week!...Gert

James Fraser July 13, 2010 at 3:14 PM An empty bottle with no story to tell, where it came from, where has it been. Poetry at it's best Scarlett >> James

Wilma Neels July 13, 2010 at 5:24 AM I enjoyed this write, especially the visuals you have created, enjoy your day Wilma

Doris Culverhouse July 13, 2010 at 5:07 AM inspired me to see a new poem for today! thanks!!

Tyler Jones July 12, 2010 at 6:55 PM great poem, it projected great imagery for me, optimisticaly

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2010 at 6:36 PM I'm with Boy Toy here, Kool write!

Phil Boy July 12, 2010 at 6:30 PM kool write! b. boy

Rinki Nandy July 12, 2010 at 6:01 PM you have provided the reader with the authority to decide! n i admire that idea....giving every reader an opprtunity to think! n thanks much for your encouragng remarks on smiley..GOd bless.