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Emptiness

* y l It's almost dusk - seagulls f through me to a secret shelter I wish I had... by: iolanda scripca for Constance's Contest "One Amazing Line"

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/21/2010 9:37:00 AM

Very creatively done, Iolanda-- and I love what you say here-- I wish I could be the same as those seagulls as well-- Congrats on your win & Merry Christmas :) -- nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:53:00 AM

wonderful line, congrats on your win in the contest Iolanda

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:49:00 AM

This one line really made me think of so many different things, Iolanda. Thanks! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Deb Radke

Date: 12/15/2010 8:44:00 AM

How very haunting this is - how very sad and yearning. Wonderful title for this monoku. Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:28:00 AM

Amazing line, Iolanda! Congratulatons on your well-earned win in the contest! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 4:01:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:54:00 PM

This is really great. Showing someone so empty that a seagull would fly through them. Congratualtions, Iolanda. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:57:00 PM

Iolanda, congraulations on your worthy poem's honored presentation. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:52:00 PM

Wonderful little Monoku Iolanda, many congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/6/2010 11:59:00 AM

Great message here!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 7:56:00 AM

Very meaningful and thoughtful write, Iolanda. Good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2010 3:22:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work