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Emptiness

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It's almost dusk -  seagulls f   through me to a secret shelter I wish I had...


                                                                            by: iolanda scripca


for Constance's Contest "One Amazing Line"

Copyright © Iolanda Scripca | Year Posted 2010

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 12/21/2010 9:37:00 AM Very creatively done, Iolanda-- and I love what you say here-- I wish I could be the same as those seagulls as well-- Congrats on your win & Merry Christmas :) -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/16/2010 3:09:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 12/15/2010 8:53:00 AM wonderful line, congrats on your win in the contest Iolanda Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 12/15/2010 8:49:00 AM This one line really made me think of so many different things, Iolanda. Thanks! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 12/15/2010 8:44:00 AM How very haunting this is - how very sad and yearning. Wonderful title for this monoku. Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 12/15/2010 8:28:00 AM Amazing line, Iolanda! Congratulatons on your well-earned win in the contest! Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/15/2010 4:01:00 AM Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2010 9:54:00 PM This is really great. Showing someone so empty that a seagull would fly through them. Congratualtions, Iolanda. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/14/2010 5:57:00 PM Iolanda, congraulations on your worthy poem's honored presentation. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/14/2010 2:52:00 PM Wonderful little Monoku Iolanda, many congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James :) Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 12/6/2010 11:59:00 AM Great message here! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 7:56:00 AM Very meaningful and thoughtful write, Iolanda. Good luck Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/6/2010 3:22:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work Login to Reply