Emotions

My Eyes look out into the blackness My Voice calls into the void. I see nothing I hear nothing but I feel Something I'm scared of Nothing but also scared of Something. Does my subconscious make me human? Does my fear control My destiny? Or dose my destiny control my fear? Will I ever know the feeling of emotion Or will my emotion control my fear...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/3/2023 5:00:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sally Harris

Date: 6/2/2023 9:56:00 PM

IM SCARED OF NOTHING BUT SCARED OF SOMETHING. ... I TOTALLY FEEL YOUR POEM. MAKES ME FEEL NOT SO ALONE. ACTUALLY SOMETHING I AM GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW. I HAVE BEEN FOR A WHILE . YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MY POEM DEPRESSION . TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. IM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK