Emotions

Was it just a coincidence to have seen you,
On that fateful day.
Was it a misunderstanding that I loved you,
From that moment itself.

As I feel my thoughts now fading,
Into a deep spiral of delusion.
I can't imagine how long it'd take me,
To come out of this apparition.

Maybe my mind is too bewildered,
Since a long time, perhaps how long I can't remember.
Maybe my emotions dawdle awfully, so,
They're unable to settle on anything stable since so long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Hi Tamanna, I really enjoyed your poem, especially the line 'a deep spiral of delusion', hope you keep posting! - Michelle
Bangthai Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much, it really means a lot!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Ah, you captured my fancy in the first stanza; love at first sight. Wow! Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Bangthai Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you so much!
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