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Emotional Notions

Laugh ~ burdens will become half Frown ~ more muscles bring you down Cry ~ sorrows flow from your eyes Smile ~ adds beauty to your style Stare ~ you're surprised unaware Hug ~ warm love to keep you snug 11.21.2021

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 1/19/2022 6:43:00 PM

Dear Jo, I like this so much. Good reminders. I might print it off and put it on my fridge to read each morning as I sit with my coffee. To me, it is a pretty, sweet, kind and true poem. I agree with Deb, it is a "feel good" write. It is so very clever.

Deb M

Date: 11/24/2021 2:57:00 AM

Hi Jo….such a sweet “feel good” poem. “Hug warm love to keep you snug”….I’m loving that! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/22/2021 6:04:00 AM

That was a very tasty bite Jo. You'll do well in the contest. I love what you did with each first word, giving us an experience of how it will manifest or be felt in our physical state. Thank you for sharing. A poet friend, Bill A smile and a hug for you today! I'd made this one a favorite!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/22/2021 5:40:00 AM

Love it, especially the hug'

Valsa George

Date: 11/22/2021 5:05:00 AM

So very cute ! Creative and true to the core !

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/22/2021 12:16:00 AM

This is a fabulous contender for the crown.

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/21/2021 9:23:00 AM

These simple looking lines, are so well crafted Jo, and quite complex to put together, they show your skill as a versatile poet, love this one, cheers David

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 11/21/2021 8:52:00 AM

Love this Jo.. very cleverly done! Like the way you rhymed the end of the description with the word you started with. All the best in the contest :-D

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/21/2021 7:26:00 AM

Great one Jo! Creative and true :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/21/2021 6:11:00 AM

You captured emotions well Jo hope your weekend is going well. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/21/2021 5:33:00 AM

Quite original. ~~