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Emotional Illusion

I am entirely devoted to maintaining my sanity, My body and soul is suffering from sever exhaustion. Teenage hormones amplifies conflict severity to what its not, I am told my life isn't bad, others are worse, so what? Are all my feelings just an illusion, just a misconception? Do all my experiences amount merely to a web of lies, One in which I am the helpless fly caught on a thread, Continuously struggling and pulling, only to further constrict While in actuality all I had to do was wake up from my dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/26/2015 3:00:00 PM
Kaliko, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:53:00 PM
Kaliko, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:23:00 AM
Kaliko, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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