Emotional

Why do you walk away? I love the way we look into each others eyes and never look away. Eyes like a silver moon that never leaves. Secret Glances, Second Chances carry me. Talking softly but never heard... My dreams will never be the same...

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Ian Petch

Date: 12/16/2008 7:54:00 PM

okie captain, nighty-night

Ian Petch

Date: 12/16/2008 7:48:00 PM

hehehe, u shud check out elftown then... although the real trick is to be patient about it and just concentrate on sorting through the smaller things in ur life... the bigger things tend to fall into place throughout :P

Ian Petch

Date: 12/16/2008 7:34:00 PM

looking for anything serious with guys then? ..cos in my opinion, 16 yr old guys tend to be more about sex and parties :P though there r a rare few that r alright at that age. or do u just go for older guys anyway?

I Have Forgiven You But It Will Never Be The Same

Date: 12/8/2008 5:24:00 AM

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John Loving Iii

Date: 12/3/2008 11:41:00 AM

good. john

Catia Davis

Date: 11/17/2008 10:13:00 AM

oh! i remember you! hey how are you doing?

Daver Austin

Date: 11/14/2008 5:03:00 AM

This would make a good song, Alexz. I like the way you place your reader in dream state. After all, who the hell can stand reality? Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/27/2008 6:17:00 PM

Be you, Alexz. Nobody can be you better than you. That should be good enough for anyone. As isaid before, don't worry about the rest. They aren't worth it. Those who judge will someday be judged. God Bless. Vince