Emily-The Journey

when I on a new genre alight- enthusiasm ,in me a-lights

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Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2009 10:41:00 AM

Thank you once again Brian, for including my poem among the winning adaptations! I will look forward to the next contest, and I'm on my way now to check out the format! Thank you for providing these enjoyable challenges! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 6:09:00 AM

Brian .. superb... bravo... I would like to think this would apply to writers everywhere.. u have phrased it so poignantly ... good job with this one...excellent flair... thankxxx for sharing and for your most gracious comments on my poetry today.. very encouraging.. have posted my blog and one photo so far.. still having problems with downiloading the rest... have contacted Soup management team.. have a pleasant day and thrill us with more poetry ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. :Sweetheart"

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/10/2009 12:17:00 PM

You Mr. Brian have a way with words. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. God Bless phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2009 7:35:00 AM

Indeed, the enthusiasm is evident in both your art and poetry...and it lights enthusiasm in the rest of us as well! :)Best wishes..Carrie

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/10/2009 6:15:00 AM

Excellent. It amazes me how so few words can say so much. I love the way your words create a picture and fill the heart with warmth and a smile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2009 2:58:00 AM

Nicely done. New terminology in the genre or was it old and I just didn't know about until my grandson. Keep writing. Sara. Thanks for comments and your concern for Doris.