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Emerald Staircase

On a stair of green,
Climbing the steps of mute leaves:
Praying for thy wings.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/3/2010 11:55:00 AM

Amazing title Raul, followed by an equally amazing poem >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/3/2010 8:55:00 AM

I love those "Muteleaves"..Beautiful -Charma.

Karla Null

Date: 5/2/2010 11:29:00 PM

When ever I visit this site you are one of my favorite poets. It's been a while since I've read one of your expressive Haiku's....Blessings....Karla

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/1/2010 7:37:00 PM

Dear Raul, Now This is a Caterpillar"s Haiku no Humor in Your Haiku Contest HUH YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/1/2010 7:23:00 AM

missed this one due to illness but glad got on other ones and thanks for the placements in your contest very tough ones to get right keep up the great work here at soupland

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 3:57:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku today, Raúl!!! Que bonitas palabras: Climbing the steps of mute leaves. Thank you for your comments and have a great weekend...Gert

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/30/2010 9:29:00 AM

very nice thanks for enjoying my poem in your contest have a great weekend faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/30/2010 4:30:00 AM

TWO SOUP MAILS this Friday..luv..

Tyler Martin

Date: 4/29/2010 8:11:00 PM

Like your view of the photo, it always has a great quality of words. Nice work and like the new contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/29/2010 7:49:00 PM

Reply soupmail Raul! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 7:20:00 PM

And such a lovely description in your own words of Haiku .. and being a May baby your title is awesome .. emeralds are my favorite gem as they represent not only the photo visual but my birthstone as well... this was an enormously fun contest do write for Raul and thankxxx for placing The Green Mile as one of your winners... the photo reminded me of the movie of the same title and how the caterpillar is a prisoner of his own body until he becomes the elusive butterfly.. luv.. "Sweetheart".. ty.

Date: 4/29/2010 7:10:00 PM

Wow! Had you not been the judge this one would have been in the winners circle for sure. What an interesting and uplifting view. Thank you for selecting my poem as one of those that place in your contest. I am grateful for the opportunity. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/29/2010 6:58:00 PM

Thanks so much, Raul, for placing my Caterpillar in your contest! Such a fun picture that was.....however, after reading your own haiku....I still declare that no one can write a haiku as well as you !! :) thank you very much!!! Love, Carrie

Joe Flach

Date: 4/29/2010 6:42:00 PM

Always saving the best for last - your own entry in your contests. Thanks for including me in your ranking. More importantly, regardless of selecting my entry or not thanks for holding these contest. I love the challenge; love reading the entries and sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the results to come in.

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