Emerald Green

A princess wished for a pet dragon of her very own. And in tune with dragon lure she bought a precious green stone. It was known in those ages that baby dragons could swim. And during a full March moon they'd sometimes act on a whim. Sparkling stones in the water oft lured young ones to jump in. And if you're there to catch one it will warm next to your skin. Breathing through a silver straw she sits silently below. And with her glittering stone waits for a dragon to show. Feeling the water ripple she reaches out with both hands. And though fire burns her fingers in her hands, a dragon stands. Dragons are magic creatures, invisible until seen. And as she holds the dragon, it shifts to emerald green. (Quatrain) Oct.16, 2015
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Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Love the way you portray the trap "Breathing through a silver straw she sits silently below. And with her glittering stone waits for a dragon to show." And I love your closing stanza. This is a delightfully whimsical poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Bravo! Very original and great winning poem. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Thanks Carol, your comments are most welcome and eagerly sought. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:08 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Emile!
Pinet Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Upma, your support is most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Emile nice win congratulations
Pinet Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Michael, your support is most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Wigley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 11:02 PM
A marvellous piece of magic, Emile, well done. regards, Viv
Pinet Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Viv, your support is most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Lindley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Congrats on this great poem and your win. Emeralds are my favorite stone, as I so love the green. A7
Pinet Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Robert, your comments are most welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:29 PM
what a lovely story Emile and I adore the image - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Leiser Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 8:51 PM
I loved the story in this excellently written poem, Emile! You have such a great imagination! Good luck in the contest :)
Pinet Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Laurie Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 5:43 PM
A great poetic fantasy story for children Emile - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Thanks Lindsay, I appreciate the visit. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Lovely to envision your magical imagery in this creative piece Emile. This should do well in the contest! #7
Pinet Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate the visit and the 7. Emile.
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