Emerald Eyes

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As I stroll along the beach, I listen to the ocean. And a glint in the moonlight steers my eyes to Her beauty. Bobbing among the whitecaps, a dashing figure taunts me. And like a mermaid of lore, She entices me to Her. Gyrating in sexy sways: Her ample curves stir my loins. And Her slow, erotic dance, triggers a hypnotic trance. Ivory and ebony offset Her emerald eyes. And this seductive siren beckons from cascading waves. As shadows shift with the light, her silhouette slowly fades. And once more, I am alone; on this lonely, sandy shore.

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Date: 5/25/2018 9:36:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2017 7:59:00 PM
That Siren is trouble! :) Have you read my poem "Seduction of the Siren Sisters? ;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Kim, your comments are always welcome my friend, I will check out your poem, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2017 7:18:00 PM
Emile...elegant poem with unabashed admiration for female beauty...nicely done and enjoyable to read
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Date: 5/18/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks James, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2017 4:21:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, a painting to be able to walk out and see, Emile, and the photo you pick or fabulous. .
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Date: 5/17/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thanks Eve, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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