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Emerald Echoes - Anacreontic Verse

I'm an emerald echo of earth's caterpillar, a camouflaging hiatus of muse midst karmic rainstorms. Enslaved to jealous stars flaming within infernal wings, I yearn to spellbind sacred heaven's throne, chasing subconscious liberty in crowned soul of marine eyes. Tracing saffron fingertips in silent smokes of Venus, willingly, I've scarred tuscan shine of Aphrodite with pearl's thermal ache. So now, when new year's first sunflower sings ~ breathing ambrosia in gemstones of bejeweled healing, a poet shall be reborn as a ruby-amethyst, snowtail butterfly.

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Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/31/2024 6:27:00 AM

I am grateful for your sharing and the efforts you put into your poem. It is meaningful to me all the poems written in this contest meant something to the authors. I truly appreciate that. Congrats!!!

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/18/2023 1:21:00 AM

Hiya, now this outlays into a Lyric Format, that is its intent on one side of the spectrum, and the other is content, I'm not sure, it's still a bit new, and now Silent One threw another monkey wrench into the woodwork, a bit overwhelming but it does have the quill doing overtime, my friend. Aloha, William

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2023 12:35:00 PM

Very spiritural- I loved the concepts here.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/13/2023 12:58:00 AM

Very very nice. I am charmed. Blessings.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/10/2023 6:46:00 PM

rich and colorful - nicely said

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/10/2023 6:16:00 PM

Beautiful descriptive lines that led to the finale of a reborn poet was astounding. I hope to hear more like this poem. It makes my head spin.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/10/2023 2:59:00 PM

Awww a ruby- amethyst snow-tailed butterfly. That really creates an awesome mind portrait. You transcend your colorful descriptions, Hiya

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/10/2023 12:38:00 PM

Hiya, the lines of your poem delight and amaze. I greatly enjoyed the lovely images, especially 'when new year's first sunflower sings' and 'ruby-amethyst, snowtail butterfly.' Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/10/2023 7:51:00 AM

Dear Hiya, Your skillfully selected diction is, as usual, entirely captivating. It appears that the principal aim of this exceptional piece of writing is to clarify terms that hold profound significance. Your composition is replete with eloquent metaphors and profound ideas. "Reborn as a ruby-amethyst, snowtail butterfly" and "I'm an emerald echo of the earth's caterpillar" are two of my favorite lines.

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2023 7:04:00 AM

Well done on trying this verse... I think the main purpose of this one is the simplicity of words with a profound meaning.. you have a great selection of words, but a bit too many metaphors in this one.. Good luck in the contest dear poet..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2023 7:02:00 AM

Fabulous, enchanting--your diction, as always, charms the reader in this poem, Hiya--as emerald echo of caterpillar transforms into ruby-amethyst butterfly.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2023 6:01:00 AM

Quite descriptive work you have penned. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/10/2023 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear Sara, I truly appreciate your kind support, sending light :)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/10/2023 5:08:00 AM

This is so beautifully written, Hiya. As lovely as a "Ruby-amethyst snow-tail butterfly" sounds. I can't picture myself being reborn into that...maybe a monarch instead (lol). Love this! Charlie

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/10/2023 8:36:00 AM

Awh, thank you so much dear Charles.. Yes, definitely, monarch butterflies are magical themselves, haha! One of my imagination says that my heart will be reborn as a butterfly maybe & that's where the inspiration came for this poem.. :) Thank you so much for your beautiful feedback, I'm glad you like this!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2023 4:44:00 AM

Ah i absolutely love this anacreontic angelic star, the flow and creative diction truly makes this one stand out for me. And i must also highlight your use of aphrodite here is so clever and brilliant. I love also your use of colours as well as how you’ve titled it emerald echoes. How creative. Especially “ So now, when new year's first sunflower sings ~breathing ambrosia in gemstones of bejewelled healing,” ah i love sunflowers and new year is also my birthday. So i can resonate with those

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/10/2023 8:31:00 AM

Awwn, my dear Ink you are the sweetest! I loveee ur magical comments on my poems always, they encourage me so much.. Thank you for always motivating me to try different forms etc. and being an inspiration. I was a bit nervous with this one but your heartwarming comment really helped!! I'm grateful~ :)

Ink Empress
Date: 12/10/2023 4:45:00 AM

Lines especially the ending. You really know how to take away any readers breath with your exquisite word weaving! This definitely is a new fave for me! BOL for the contest I absolutely loved reading this one

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/10/2023 4:39:00 AM

I'm not sure if you belong to earth or heaven when you write like this Hiya :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/10/2023 4:42:00 AM

Awwn, this brightened up my day, you sweet soul~ thank you so much for your heartwarming words, I'm beyond grateful, you've such a heavenly heart yourself, sending you love :)