Embracing Eve

The moon that eve brought was full
Enlightened grays, overwhelming dulls
Silence softened textures, once rough
Vibrant shimmers, quietly caressed.

Sometime simplicities, suffer obsessed
I sought your touch, a tempting silhouette
Seeking again to gain, a moments you
Too taste, too blend, and too know.

Still you heard not my approach?
Even as from swift turnings I slowed
My feet, as yours, bared, touched down
Although, the calloused experienced
Rarely feels ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Michael. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on your win Michael. This is a good write.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Very nice. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Big congratulations to you on your win. I like the softness this evokes.
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February 12, 2012 at 2:23 AM
MICHAEL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 5:35 PM
congrats Michael on an excellent win for this wonderful write luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Perritano Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:49 PM
thank you
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February 10, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Congrats! I enjoyed reading tonight. Blessings, Rhonda
Arno Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great placement in the contest. Jon
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February 10, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations!
Perritano Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:49 PM
thank you
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