Embracing Eve

The moon that eve brought was full
Enlightened grays, overwhelming dulls
Silence softened textures, once rough
Vibrant shimmers, quietly caressed.

Sometime simplicities, suffer obsessed
I sought your touch, a tempting silhouette
Seeking again to gain, a moments you
Too taste, too blend, and too know.

Still you heard not my approach?
Even as from swift turnings I slowed
My feet, as yours, bared, touched down
Although, the calloused experienced
Rarely feels ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/14/2012 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2012 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Michael. This is a good write.
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:44:00 AM
Very nice. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/13/2012 8:26:00 AM
Big congratulations to you on your win. I like the softness this evokes.
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:23:00 AM
MICHAEL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 5:35:00 PM
congrats Michael on an excellent win for this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 2/11/2012 3:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Michael Perritano
Date: 2/11/2012 3:49:00 PM
thank you
Date: 2/10/2012 7:26:00 PM
Congrats! I enjoyed reading tonight. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great placement in the contest. Jon
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Michael Perritano
Date: 2/11/2012 3:49:00 PM
thank you
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