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A vivid scarlet scar snakes across her abdomen … It was touch and go when she went into premature labour Such a small price to pay for the safe delivery of her tiny baby son Contest – Embrace the Line sponsored by David Lindsay 06~28~16

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/6/2016 4:49:00 PM

Powerfully written emphasizing the importance of how altering one's perception can effect positive change, especially of oneself, which is where all change begins. Beautiful title, Beautiful write! blessings, lynn

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2016 9:31:00 AM

This was my idea, not specifically, but the line I was considering. I have yet to write anything for contest. Yours certainly packs an emotional punch one cannot blink away. Great job and good luck in ALL things ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:12:00 PM

Thanks CayCay:-) I have seen such different takes on the theme hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/1/2016 7:08:00 PM

I love this, good luck in the contest. Congratulations on your son's accomplishment!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/1/2016 3:43:00 AM

The scar doesn't matter when it is necessary for giving birth to another life:) Beautifully expressed, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:11:00 PM

I agree with you Jo thankfully I didn't need a cesarean but they can save lives of both mother and child

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/30/2016 1:22:00 PM

short yet so substantive, jan... this is really awesome!.. mail sent... huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/29/2016 11:01:00 PM

You have given a new color to abdomen scars dear friend. The scars come and often go but the gift of a child may become a boon for the mother, if her son would care for her when she would need that care and love. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your kind words on my recent poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Ravindra:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2016 10:50:00 PM

hey, jan. It's getting really hard for me to keep up here with us leaving Friday early morning. hope we can chat one more time in emails tomorrow before I leave for Oregon!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:10:00 PM

I'm just catching up now:-) hugs jan xx